Comments | first_spike: All the Small Things (part 31)

first_spike

All the Small Things (part 31)

Sep 01, 2006 09:46

The taxi pulled into the crescent-shaped ramp and stopped behind a limo.
( read Part 31: Monday afternoon. )

Comments 8

oh_mumble September 1 2006, 12:24:06 UTC

Oh, Doug. Things are never easy for him, are they?

Love the Tom-Fletch interaction. Very... tender, without being overemotional; Fletch really cares for his boys, and it's nice to see the early stages of that relationship he has with them.

first_spike September 2 2006, 09:31:49 UTC

He's gonna have that blimmin' Dragostea Din Tei running around his head for the rest of the afternoon, for a start. :)
More Fletch anon. See what you think.

thisxsimplicity September 1 2006, 16:20:16 UTC

You can't leave it like that!! ahh!!
::Sits on edge of seat::

first_spike September 2 2006, 09:11:16 UTC

Actually, you just reminded me. Isn't this the point where the author is supposed to disappear for a few months, then post a short message about how the story's being put on hold for a while…?

postitjunkie September 1 2006, 21:52:28 UTC

AHHH! You updated yay! It gets better and better with each update! Can't wait for more!

first_spike September 2 2006, 09:23:47 UTC

I like your little rabbit-icon thingy. Although around these boys, he/she probably ought to be wearing a crash helmet.

smithee06 September 1 2006, 22:28:30 UTC

hahaha, Danny and his music.
I think I'd cry if Dougie wrote I <3 Nikki on my autograph. =]

first_spike September 2 2006, 09:15:50 UTC

Nah… I'd hold out for a little stick-Dougie if I were you, with or without swollen foot. You don't want to let these celebs off lightly, you know.