Comments | first_spike: All the Small Things (part 27)

first_spike

All the Small Things (part 27)

Aug 30, 2006 08:46

Sunday night

“Ow.” Danny stopped, blew a few times across his fingers, then slurped at his tea. Mugs should have lids, wouldn't have this problem then.
( read Part 27: Sunday night. )

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Comments 13

kamily_emilla August 30 2006, 10:40:23 UTC

Oh Danny! Danny! The poor thing *narrows eyes and clenches fist* Hurt him and I will be very angry!

Awwww, Dougie and Harry, so cute!

first_spike August 31 2006, 08:56:08 UTC

Why do I suddenly feel like a hiker that's got between a mother bear and her cub?

kamily_emilla August 31 2006, 16:08:43 UTC

I feel I should be offended that I just got called a Bear!

Haha, yup yup, run hiker, run!

oh_mumble August 30 2006, 14:01:16 UTC

I'm loving the development of the Dougie+Harry relationship, and how Dougie's staring to take a more active role instead of just letting things happen to him. It makes me less worried for Harry, messed up as he is, that he's now got someone watching out for him.

Which means I'm now worrying most about Danny. Because up until now, he's been the one taking care of everyone and keeping them together, and now I think he's on the verge of falling apart himself.

first_spike August 31 2006, 09:27:44 UTC

[puts on smug smile, sits back and strokes white Persian cat.]

thisxsimplicity August 30 2006, 20:25:41 UTC

Have I ever told you that I love this story? :D

first_spike August 31 2006, 08:57:05 UTC

Ummm… Not sure. Maybe you'd better tell me again, just to be on the safe side. :)

smithee06 August 30 2006, 22:05:41 UTC

Awh, little Danny.

It's like the tables have turned.

first_spike August 31 2006, 08:57:45 UTC

Don't worrry. It's just a boy-thing.

smithee06 August 31 2006, 21:20:32 UTC

Why does that scare me...? lol

first_spike August 31 2006, 09:38:35 UTC

I spent quite a while debating whether to include the last scene of this installment or not. On one hand, it lays bare (cough!) something about Dan's character that's been there more subtly for quite a while, maybe even from the outset. On the other hand, it's incidental to the events of the story, possibly even distracting.

But red herrings are rather pretty fish, don't you think?

oh_mumble August 31 2006, 11:52:19 UTC

You know I'm going to go back and read this again just to look more closely at Danny now, right? ::suffering sigh::