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Feb 26, 2010 09:46

Title: No Expectations - Chapter Five
Author: firiel77
Word Count: 4096
Warnings: WIP, mpreg
Rating: M
Pairings: Adam/Tommy, Tommy/OFC.
Summary: Tommy’s just feeling a bit off. Set about five years in the future. Adam is a Rock God. Tommy still plays guitar for him.
Beta: thrace_adams Whee, thanks so much for stepping in with the beta and all the encouragement ( Read more... )

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anonymous February 26 2011, 18:38:51 UTC
Great new chapter. Very realistic bickering too, I am so glad a truce had been called by the end of the chapter. Just a little typo I noticed - sold his sole (fish/bottom of shoe) to the devil should be soul. x x

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yay!!! mmonroebpd February 26 2011, 19:20:07 UTC
New chapter! I hope Tommy's common sense kicks in soon and starts eating better for "little Adam". Adam seems excited to be a daddy too. *ovaries explode*

LOVE IT!

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Re: yay!!! firiel77 February 27 2011, 20:05:28 UTC
Lol, sorry about your ovaries.

Glad you like it.

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lelouch7 February 26 2011, 19:20:47 UTC
love the friction and bickering
and the last part is so sweet

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firiel77 February 27 2011, 20:05:57 UTC
Glad you're liking it.

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valress February 26 2011, 19:57:30 UTC
I love the friction! All of Tommy's emotions are so real! I remember having a fight over beets... Yeah, I won't touch them...they taste like dirt and stain everything pink... even your teeth. I love the fact that they both agreed they were out of line and they are gonna try to get better :) <3

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court1429 February 26 2011, 19:59:58 UTC
Re: beets. I think they taste like dirt, too! Nobody ever gets it when I say that, though. But they do; they taste like earth. They're pretty and they're full of good nutrition, but I am not eating them. ;)

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firiel77 February 27 2011, 20:10:21 UTC
Lol, there has to be some friction. Can't be happily ever after just yet or there'd be no story.

Glad you're liking it.

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adamgrrrl February 28 2011, 19:41:39 UTC
my mom ALWAYS had beets whenever she made mashed potatoes. next thing you know, swirly pink potatoes. one of THE nastiest things during my childhood. plus, she likes to tell ppl that she "NEVER FORCED US TO EAT WHAT WE DIDN'T WANT." that's such bullshit. those beets were a burden of epic proportions when i was growing up. *shudder*

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court1429 February 26 2011, 19:58:27 UTC
Still very much enjoying this fic and am happy when I see an update. ;)

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firiel77 February 27 2011, 20:11:00 UTC
Thanks. There's lots more to come. I wish I could just writ short fics but it never ends up that way.

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court1429 February 27 2011, 20:56:02 UTC
You couldn't have written a reply that I'd like to read more than the one you did write if you'd gone out and done research!

I know some people prefer short fics. I am not one of those people. Give me a novel over a collection of short stories any day of the week. ;)

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firiel77 February 28 2011, 01:14:48 UTC
I think I'm up to about chapter sixteen and no end in sight.

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