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[firewitch127]

Had to write a poem for lit the other day, modeled off of some other one Hartung gave us, and this is what I came up with. It's totally sad, but I think it came out really good. Tell me what you think!! ~alyse

"Theme for American Literature, Honors”

The instructor said,

Go home and write

A page tonight.

And let

Comments

[another_minute]

I love it!!! :o) I love how you keep repeating her eyes because it makes it very powerful!! I loooove you babe- miss you like whoa!!
~hugsnkisses~
Lizabeth

[pinknfuzzy_]

girl that's awesome, i can totally see it too. straight from the heart, thas ma girl.
stay strong

<3 susan

[slay_me__]

so much better than mine, lol, i had to write it in 5mins before class.
i got a 95 on it though
i love it.
feel better darling.

[define_my_soul]

hey you!!!!
add me already will ya!!???
<33
tanya