Lovely! You know how much I like this, but I'll tell you again - *wonderful!*
What I like about this is how in-character all the players feel to me. I know it's a matter of interpretation, but Jensen always strikes me as being a steady kind of character, Jared a bit excitable, quick to act but full of a deep down kindness, pretty much like the guys are here.
Misha made perfect sense to me. I disliked him in this story but it made sense for him to act as he did. He saw Jared as a kid, not an equal partner, so I don't think he made a move on Jensen because he disliked Jared - Jared just didn't fit in the equation for him. He admired Jensen and was probably attracted to his intensity, not getting that it applied to Jared as well. And he was kind of arrogant, without getting that he was, if you get my drift.
Danni was great--I loved her as Jensen's assisatant and as his inner voice - I loved how competent and no nonsense she was. I kind of see her as being this way in RL, too. :D And Stephen...well, I just don't like him, in RL and in your fic. He made good points, for sure, and he probably kind of cared for Jared in his own way, but love, no. I'm so glad Jared didn't make a terrible mistake. I was a little worried at first, but thank goodness, love and common sense won out in the end! Great ay of showing how he's grown up, from an infatuated kid to a young man in love. Excellent job, my dear! <3
What I like about this is how in-character all the players feel to me. I know it's a matter of interpretation, but Jensen always strikes me as being a steady kind of character, Jared a bit excitable, quick to act but full of a deep down kindness, pretty much like the guys are here.
Misha made perfect sense to me. I disliked him in this story but it made sense for him to act as he did. He saw Jared as a kid, not an equal partner, so I don't think he made a move on Jensen because he disliked Jared - Jared just didn't fit in the equation for him. He admired Jensen and was probably attracted to his intensity, not getting that it applied to Jared as well. And he was kind of arrogant, without getting that he was, if you get my drift.
Danni was great--I loved her as Jensen's assisatant and as his inner voice - I loved how competent and no nonsense she was. I kind of see her as being this way in RL, too. :D And Stephen...well, I just don't like him, in RL and in your fic. He made good points, for sure, and he probably kind of cared for Jared in his own way, but love, no. I'm so glad Jared didn't make a terrible mistake. I was a little worried at first, but thank goodness, love and common sense won out in the end! Great ay of showing how he's grown up, from an infatuated kid to a young man in love. Excellent job, my dear! <3
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