Elixir

[firesign10]

Title: Elixir
Author: firesign10
Beta: pipisafoat
Pairing(s): Jared/Jensen
Genre: SPN RPS, AU
Rating: NC-17
Warnings: M/M sex (but not in this part)
Spoiler(s): None
Summary: Jensen's looking for true love... can a hot dance club be the place to find it?

Disclaimer: It's all fiction, Jensen and Jared belong to themselves, I have an overactive imagination.
Note: Part 1

Comments

[roxymissrose]

Ha! I missed the part where you said there'd be more and had a little hissy fit at the end of this!

Excellent start--great atmosphere, I like it when I can clearly see where the characters are. I liked very much that as much as Jensen was physically attracted to Tall Guy (*g*), it was his energy, his happiness, that drew him. Looking forward to seeing what comes next! :)

[firesign10]

Thank you!! I'm really glad the atmosphere worked for you, I wanted it to make a statement :-)

[sam_dean_lover]

wow, very interesting, i'll be here for chap 2

[firesign10]

Thank you!!

[cedarwolfsinger]

Nice work! I don't know the fandom but I like Jensen. Awaiting part 2!

[firesign10]

Thank you! It's supernatural RPS (real person slash) - a slash story about the two stars, Jensen and Jared. Part 2 is in progress, hope you like it! :-D

[sadritsuka12]

omg...lol wow

[firesign10]

Hahaha! A good wow?? Thank you :-)

[fiercelynormal]

Lovely! Great start - I like how Jensen isn't completely motivated by looks; more by Jared's infectious happiness. Looking forward to more!

[firesign10]

Thank you!!! I'm glad that came across well - as undeniably hot as Jared is, it's not his only attraction! Part 2 is shaping right up and will probably post at the end of the week.