[multi chapter fic] Crazy Love Chapter 6

[fireside_story]

Oh my effing geez!! When I set out to type this chapter this morning, it was going to be a simple but heart wrenching little chapter. During the typing process all that changed!!! Well it's still a little heart wrenching but it's not as little as it was and it changed a whole hell of a lot!!! I was really not looking forward to typing this one out

Comments

[romapi]

it's been ages that this fic is updated.

thanks for updating. Now let see how Kameda works.

[fireside_story]

I'm really going to try and start updating sooner then I have been, we'll just have to wait and see if that actually happens.

Thanks for reading!!

[dorayaki_chan]

Poor junno but the bomb has finally dropped now , preparing my self to face the ugly aftermath :'(

[fireside_story]

Yes and what a bomb it was!! It wasn't the way I had originally planned it, but I like this way better.

Things are going to get ugly with Junno hurt, angry and at dance rehearsal with the two people that hurt him.

[ladyc2]

Well, I suppose it had to happen at some point - poor Junno, it wasn't the easiest way to find out (not that any way would be easy, but...). I wonder if Junno will tell Koki or whether Koki will find out seperately.

Can't wait to see how it goes from here

[fireside_story]

Unfortunately for poor Junno, it did have to happen. As for Koki's reaction, that will be in a chapter not too far off now.

I'm glad your enjoying it and thanks for the comment.

[dori_liv]

Great update :) There are lots of little things i really like here.

'With a simple word that belief had been shattered into a million jagged little pieces, each cutting their own painful wound '
Great imagery!

he had to watch just as Junno had to show it to him

He knew his evening with Kame would be the only time he'd ever get with the one man he truly wanted, so he wanted that time to be special, now it was tainted by Junno's fury.

Knowing Kame had had his stubby little fingers all over his Ueda was one thing
I love how you can see Junno's anger/jealousy at kame in this line.

and I have a feeling it would have been amazingProbably not the best thing to admit right then

[fireside_story]

First of all this comment made my day when I first read it!! Your words really helped me since I was feeling as if I hadn't really portrayed all the feelings I wanted to with this chapter.

I know Ueda admitting that sleeping with Kame would be amazing was bad timing, but it was one of those moment where anger takes over and common sense goes out the window.

I felt so bad for Ueda after all of this that I needed to give him some form of comfort, hence where the dogs came in.

Again thanks for your kind words!! I hope you enjoy the next chapter when it goes up (which will hopefully be soon)!!