[OOC: How's My Driving ConCrit!]

Mar 01, 2009 00:25

[This is here because I feel like I have been having trouble characterizing lately. Especially with Calgara, and a bit with Kaku. Eneru too. Though any concrit on Eneru will have to be pre-apple switch, as that is occurring in a few minutes.

So here's my thing with them:

Calgara - fireofshandora

I love this character. But lately, I feel as though I've had him be either too nice, too intellectual, or something similar. I feel like he needs to be really ANGRY and kill something, or at least be more intense and not so pleasant. But this has been hard lately, as he's not really had any opportunities arise for such a situation.

I would really love some concrit on Calgara especially. ANYTHING at all. Good, bad, anything.

Kaku - kirin_ja

Oh, Kaku. You are a lot of fun. This is mostly because I have NEVER RPed Kaku before in my life until I took him up for this game. So any input on just him in general would be nice.

Eneru - yahahaha

Sometimes it's hard to get into Eneru's head simply because he is a total wackjob. Megalomania, god complex, Mantra, Logia power...the man is insane, and at times that can be hard to write.

Thanks, guys! I'd feel worlds better with some input from my fellow players. And please, don't hold back. I won't improve if you don't tell me straight up.

concrit, ooc, hmd

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