Fic: "Miracle" - Rivercentric - General Audiences

Sep 25, 2005 21:41

Title: "Miracle"
Author: Willa willshenillshe
Summary: Firefly - Rivercentric piece focusing on the tumbled thoughts that might have been crashing through her mind as she was transported onto Serenity.
Written For: Weekly Challenge at ff_friday
625 words
Note: I think I like writing River as much as I like writing Drusilla. *eg*

'Miracle' - River Thinks To Herself )

pov, river

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ladygloria September 27 2005, 01:41:34 UTC
lovely!

Personally I think that River is more interesting than Dru, simply because of the brillance and the mystery...

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srichard September 27 2005, 07:21:23 UTC
Very nice. I'm a sucker for a structured stream of consciousness, if that makes any sense.

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greenapricot October 15 2005, 21:22:57 UTC
Mmm, I really like this. The nursery rhyme bits work perfectly with the state of River's mind.

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vagablonde October 22 2005, 12:23:55 UTC
Brilliant! Just incredibly brilliant!

best line -
It’s scary, being born. You don’t know what you are yet.

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