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WELL... I have been having an internal debate for the past couple of days involving yaoi high; the internal debate consisting of whether or not I should edit yaoi high...and I mean EDIT it, as in, redo everything plot wise, rewrite chapters, have an actual solid plot with plot progression... not just fix silly grammatical and spelling errors.
I posted a long author's note as an update on ff.net... Took me 3-4 hours to get the right words and have the courage to post it (http://www.fanfiction.net/s/3157160/19/).
These are reworked summaries for the new version I was thinking of:
Summary: Attend Namikaze Gakuen, check. Make friends, check. Join a club, check. Fall in love with his teacher, che-wait, what?! Wow Naruto, didn’t know you liked older men! (“I do not like older men!”) SasuNaru, OthersNaru.
Summary: Uchiha Sasuke, an instructor at Namikaze Gakuen, has his work cut out for him when a new student sneaks his way into Sasuke’s normally solitary life. But of course nothing is ever simple, not when both of their pasts get involved. SasuNaru, OthersNaru
Summary: It was official: Uchiha Sasuke was a pedophile, and he was going to hell. Then again, Uzumaki Naruto wasn’t THAT much younger… After all, what’s a couple of years, really?
Summary: Naruto just transferred to Namikaze Gakuen, a school that's tied to him more than he realizes. He finds himself falling for one of the instructors, Uchiha Sasuke, and soon comes to learn that despite Sasuke's solitary life, he has his own secrets.
Of course, those don't have to be the only options for a summary (if I think of anything else, that is). Somehow i feel that by revising, I will lose a lot of comedic aspects of the fic, which would defeat its original intentions, but I am not satisfied with the current state of the fic... And updates will continue to take forever if I do not fix it...I honestly should have fixed it long ago, but it probably would have still come out as crap.
I realize the summaries don't seem that much different from the way yaoi high currently is...but the story itself should turn out different plot-wise. The second and fourth ones are pretty much the same, just worded differently.. if I come up with different ones I will post them.
I posted a long author's note as an update on ff.net... Took me 3-4 hours to get the right words and have the courage to post it (http://www.fanfiction.net/s/3157160/19/).
These are reworked summaries for the new version I was thinking of:
Summary: Attend Namikaze Gakuen, check. Make friends, check. Join a club, check. Fall in love with his teacher, che-wait, what?! Wow Naruto, didn’t know you liked older men! (“I do not like older men!”) SasuNaru, OthersNaru.
Summary: Uchiha Sasuke, an instructor at Namikaze Gakuen, has his work cut out for him when a new student sneaks his way into Sasuke’s normally solitary life. But of course nothing is ever simple, not when both of their pasts get involved. SasuNaru, OthersNaru
Summary: It was official: Uchiha Sasuke was a pedophile, and he was going to hell. Then again, Uzumaki Naruto wasn’t THAT much younger… After all, what’s a couple of years, really?
Summary: Naruto just transferred to Namikaze Gakuen, a school that's tied to him more than he realizes. He finds himself falling for one of the instructors, Uchiha Sasuke, and soon comes to learn that despite Sasuke's solitary life, he has his own secrets.
Of course, those don't have to be the only options for a summary (if I think of anything else, that is). Somehow i feel that by revising, I will lose a lot of comedic aspects of the fic, which would defeat its original intentions, but I am not satisfied with the current state of the fic... And updates will continue to take forever if I do not fix it...I honestly should have fixed it long ago, but it probably would have still come out as crap.
I realize the summaries don't seem that much different from the way yaoi high currently is...but the story itself should turn out different plot-wise. The second and fourth ones are pretty much the same, just worded differently.. if I come up with different ones I will post them.