Bloody Ribbons Part I

Oct 31, 2011 21:05

Happy Halloween, as well as L's birthday for fans of Death Note. I love this holiday. The little kids are so cute in their costumes, I can wear kitty ears all day without anyone looking at me funny (for the most part), and there's the leftover trick or treating candy. So, I decided in honor of this wonderful holiday, I'd post this work.

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x, tsubasa, clamp, vampire, seishirou, tokyo babylon, subaru

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shirogiku November 1 2011, 15:50:40 UTC
Sorry I'm late!

Uwah!

Belated happy halloween to you too))) What a gorgeous treat this is!

Subaru smiled wickedly as he felt the bloodlust take him, but before his hunter’s instinct took him completely, he managed to utter a single word. “Run.” That's my favourite moment. He is very fun, that vam-pie.

“I thought I had seen everything, but this is definitely new.” This line is verySeihsirou. He thinks the world is his personal amusement park, with Subaru as the main attraction.

And he definitely would use the sleeping spell until he figures out what the hell is going on. So don't worry, I think you're doing great.

That "Daddy" character provides a great contrast for Seishirou, btw.

Ooh, and of course there's your trademark cliffhanger ♥♥ ♥

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YOU!!!!!!!! fire_rose17 November 2 2011, 00:10:19 UTC
I also really liked that line. I almost ended the part with that, but then the next one would have started out weird. And seriously, Subaru is so much fun to write, because he's still Subaru, kind and gentle, but he's also vicious and brutal, which is the vampire, and it's interesting trying to write both at the same time.

Yeah, typical Seishirou. Not at all surprised at some guy slurping at a corpse until he realizes it's SUBARU.

Pimp/drug dealer/pervert vs. awesome magical assassin? Yeah, no comparison. I think Subaru would agree. I was so happy to kill that guy off.

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ME!!!!!!!! shirogiku November 2 2011, 00:19:05 UTC
I'm very happy you actually posted this, tee hee

Mmm, yes, Subaru with some bite is delicious.

Seishirou finds blood on Subaru quite fetching, in fact. But he's used to smearing it there himselfXD

TB!Seishirou would also wear an orange suite -- well, not anymore.

I liked the theory about starving as a part of Yuuko's price - I haven't seen that one before.

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Re: ME!!!!!!!! fire_rose17 November 2 2011, 01:19:31 UTC
Except this version of Subaru would probably just lick the smeared blood off and go for Seishirou's neck.

I forgot about the orange suit. Just goes to show this series was originally set in the nineties. Which I'm now going to have to write about. I should be okay as long as I don't mention an iPod or something.

That theory was really just an excuse to get Subaru hungry enough to chow down on some random guy he met on the street, but I'm glad you liked it.

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