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fiorediloto

[Heroes] Of blowing up and blowjobs

Jul 12, 2008 22:52

Title: Of blowing up and blowjobs
Fandom: Heroes
Pairing: Nathan/Peter
Rating: NC-17
Word Count: 1,356 (W)
Warning(s): Pre-series. Bad jokes. Worst title ever. Underage.
Thanks to: snopes_faith, the black adder beta.

( Here's Peter Petrelli, sixteen years old, a pillow under his armpit and a Ninja Turtles shirt now one or two sizes too small, but so worn out it fits him perfectly. )

fic, language: english, fic: heroes, pairing: nathan/peter

Comments 8

Quite blow for blow account anonymous July 13 2008, 11:13:27 UTC

Peter as dream of Nathan blowing up then proceeded blow Nathan in toally different way is funny. You're nuts by the way, but in a good way.

Re: Quite blow for blow account fiorediloto July 13 2008, 11:15:43 UTC

Thanks! I take that as a compliment XD

eryslash July 13 2008, 17:37:37 UTC

BUT IT'S AN EXTENDED, DIRTIER VERSION. Why didn't I get the dirty one? IT'S UNFAIR IT'S UNFAIR!

fiorediloto July 13 2008, 18:03:08 UTC

No, dear, it's the same, just translated O_O

mystery_sock July 13 2008, 18:17:00 UTC

This is lovely! (And extremely hot, too...) I love how thoughtful and deliberate your fics are, and how you spend time on the little details, like this:

Peter crawls closer, skipping the little trench between the two pillows. Nathan's one is warmer, and smells like him.

It's incredibly sensual. Love it!

fiorediloto July 14 2008, 10:49:07 UTC

Thank you very much! ^^

hermyone6 July 14 2008, 15:01:26 UTC

Il dialogo è perfetto, l'atmosfera sensuale ma estremamente attenta ai due caratteri.
Delizioso, davvero delizioso.

fiorediloto July 14 2008, 16:14:43 UTC

Grazie, sei molto gentile ^^