[Heroes] You can sleep while I drive (Nathan/Peter, NC-17, FYG AU)

[fiorediloto]

Title: You can sleep while I drive
Fandom: Heroes
Pairing: Nathan/Peter
Rating: NC-17
Word Count: 6954 (W)
Warning(s): Underage sex, ideal (?) incest, infinite angst
Spoiler(s): 1x20, "Five years gone"
Thanks to: snopes_faith, the tireless beta.
Notes: It's a past fic of mine (written in November 2007) and I'm not totally satisfied with it, but it seems this

Comments

[brighteyed_jill]

I heart 5YG AUs. And I heart waif!Peter and scruffy!Nathan. And I love it when Nathan and Peter save each other. So basically I love everything about this story.

The blowjob in the parking lot scene was so dirtybadwronghot. I liked the description of the pictures Nathan keeps on his dashboard, too.
Unlike the President, you perfectly know that some wounds never heal. Awww, poor broken Nathan.

This made me giggle: If there's one thing it's better to avoid, it's leaving traces of DNA around in Texas.

This line is lovely: You want him and you know you shouldn't, but he's there, offering himself with such a candor you don't know how not to reach out and take him. But really that whole scene is highly fabulous, with Peter being all tentative and inexperienced. Awww. But this was strangely sweet: "No, I...", his breath catches when you start caressing him, "I took these before I came here. For... for us."

And their pillow talk was nicely snarky and sweet at the same time. Heh heh.

So, in conclusion, hooray! Thanks for writing this!

[fiorediloto]

I love 5YG and everything around it, so I suppose it was just a matter of time before I wrote something about it. Dark future, mmmmmm. (I'm such an easy to please viewer...)

Thanks for commenting and letting me know your fav lines! Actually, the sex scene is the one I loathe most - I just think it ended up sloppy. But Nathan was so sick of being sad that I couldn't refuse him the luxury of being sloppy for once. (And this Nathan is quite my saddest one, so I suppose he could afford it after all.)

[meli_64]

Oh man this was brilliant and perfect! Seriously wonderful! :D Perfect.

[fiorediloto]

Thanks!

[dragonydreams]

I loved this. Peter was a wonderful mixture of world-savvy and naive. I loved grumpy!Nathan.

[fiorediloto]

I confess I too have a thing for grumpy!Nathan... (Mmmmmmm. Rude charm.)

[run_itskelly]

This was a great story; I loved how you did the characterizations and the descriptions of the FYG world

[fiorediloto]

Thanks, I'm glad you liked!

[scarlet_paire]

Beautiful! I almost can see Nathan driving the truck with Peter by his side. Amazing! \o\ Congratulations, you're fantastic!

[fiorediloto]

Thank you very much! I'm glad you liked it ;)