Moving On (17/20)

Nov 30, 2011 14:55


Title: Moving On
Rating: R
Pairing: Finn/Sam
Words: ~3,000
Notes: Next up in the Sam/Finn mpreg verse. Fics in order you should read them before this one: ConfusionHelp MeGetting By.
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Part 17 )

fic rating: r

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dontaskuk November 30 2011, 21:04:46 UTC
Oh my god!!! You've got me so used to happy endings, this is like TORTURE!

Can't wait for the next part... with only three more chapters I hope you're still planning on another chapter. Love, love, LOVE this verse.

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sunshine_flying November 30 2011, 21:09:08 UTC
Wow that was fast! I know, I had to throw some angst in for the Hudson family. They'll make it through, though. They always do! :)

There will be three more chapters and then the epilogue...and then the verse will be done! It's been a long time coming - I've spent almost a full year on this verse now! The next three chapters will be full of stuff, so watch out for them :)

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caitlinpaz November 30 2011, 23:21:22 UTC
Oh my poor guys, I feel so badly for them! What an ironic turn of events like you mentioned...no problem getting pregnant when they weren't wanting/trying to but having difficulty when actively trying to conceive. I hope this is just a rough patch they're going through, maybe too stressed out or something and that's why it's not happening. I got all excited when he went to the doctor after he was first feeling sick and wasn't expecting her to say that he wasn't..I think his reply back was what I was thinking too! Lol. But a lovely chapter overall and it definitely shows how perfect these two are for each other because even through this struggle, Finn is always there to support Sam and cheer (or try his best to) him up and I had the biggest smile on my face when he told Sam that it didn't matter if they had that third, that he wouldn't hate him and that they're happy with the two they have. I love him and I know Sam would be doing the same thing if the situations were reversed. They're such a strong couple through the good and the bad ( ... )

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sunshine_flying November 30 2011, 23:46:14 UTC
Right!? I've always tried to keep this fic as real to life as possible, and sometimes it doesn't always work out the way you want to. Good news is, I'm almost done with chapter 18 already, which means the suspense as to whether they get baby number three or not will be short lived. I have to admit, the Comic Con for their honeymoon wasn't my idea, it was the idea of a friend of mine who helps me with this fic when I get stuck. He's also the one that chose what they'd go as because I literally only know Star Wars when it comes to stuff like that :P

I'm so glad you liked it, though! I was worried about posting this one - I always wonder if my plot twists will turn people away or get them to keep reading. I'm glad to hear you're sticking around and I hope to have chapter 18 posted soon!

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gemmadevine38 December 1 2011, 01:03:15 UTC
Oh what a downer that they found out there may be some trouble and that baby number three may not happen at all. But he definitely needed a weekend away, to go somewhere fun to get his mind off of it because he was all smiles and fun while they were at Comic Con. I hope Sam doesn't beat himself up over this and doesn't become depressed either because that's not going to help the whole baby-making process. I do love how much he wants and desires for another baby especially since it was Finn who really wanted it when Sam wasn't ready. You write so wonderful that I really get into the story and pull for these characters to the point that i'm actually rooting for them to have another baby. Crazy, huh? And it really struck me too and I wanted to ask if that part in the story where Finn wonders if all this trouble they're having means it'll be a difficult pregnancy...you wouldn't do it to them again, would ya? I am way too excited for chapter 18 so please update again soon!

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sunshine_flying December 1 2011, 01:43:48 UTC
Good news! Chapter 18 is already almost done! It should be up soon. It'll answer a lot of your questions, though not all of them. The Comic Con scenes were my favorite to write, because it meant the boys were both happy. I hate seeing them sad! Happy things are coming their way, have no fear! Thanks for reading and I can't wait to hear what you think of chapter 18 :)

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psyko_kittie December 1 2011, 03:22:09 UTC
Great chapter. Although Comic Con is in San Diego, not New York. :)

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sunshine_flying December 1 2011, 03:30:28 UTC
Thanks!

There are actually a bunch of Comic Cons throughout the country at different times of year. I know of New York and Chicago off the top of my head, along with San Diego. I even looked at the website to get the venue name right!! :)

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