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hollymac_79 February 25 2010, 00:27:49 UTC
Ooh boy. Wonder who's name's on the list that Martin might be worried about. Looking forward to the next chapter.

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chymom February 25 2010, 00:35:48 UTC
OH Man. So David needs Martins help and he's giving it to him even after what he did to Bobby. Way to go guys. I love how close the team is.

Is Martin right? Dose she want the child back for the money? Does she want to hurt the child? What does Ian think? What will Ian and David do to keep her? What does she say when she finds out and who has to tell her? Does her mom try something stupped and try to kidnap her? Does the mother use Ian and Davids job against them?

I love how Don wantied to kick some since in to David. I can't wait for more!!!!! Thanks for sharing this one.

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rambler75 February 25 2010, 01:36:09 UTC
Love the series! I really like how clueless Don was in the beginning and all the fun everyone had at his expense. :). Like this one too and will be waiting for the next chapter :D

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lives_to_learn February 25 2010, 03:24:25 UTC
ohhh! gotta love an unexpected plot twist!

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