Comments | finnishsphinx: Fic: Seminar, Chapter 12 (CSI NY/CSI/CSI Miami, Don Flack / Warrick Brown, Ryan Wolfe / Eric Delko)

finnishsphinx

Fic: Seminar, Chapter 12 (CSI NY/CSI/CSI Miami, Don Flack / Warrick Brown, Ryan Wolfe / Eric Delko)

Nov 01, 2009 21:10

( Chapter 12 )

show: csi miami, csi/ csi ny/ csi miami/ series: seminar, show: csi ny, pair: ryan wolfe / eric delko, pair: warrick brown / don flack, show: csi

Comments 5

hosoverpsychos November 1 2009, 19:26:42 UTC

Awesome as always. Loved the conversation.

freekydisaster November 1 2009, 19:32:53 UTC

Bahaaa, Flack is such a big kid. Again, you got me overly excited. I love you. Literally. Hahaa. Great update.

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finnishsphinx November 1 2009, 21:27:15 UTC

Thanks!

I wasn`t too sure about this chapter, mainly because there`s several people included in conversations. I usually like to keep the dialogue between two characters, that way there`s not so much need to keep making sure reader knows who`s saying what....

Same thing with the three-person-phonesex-session in chapter 11. Usually my dialogues work without too much descriptive text, but that one needed some explaining, especially due to Don`s risque position.... ;)

carryonrio November 2 2009, 06:45:58 UTC

Just catch up the story. Never seen this pairing before but they make perfect sense in this story, very lovely couple I'll say.

I so love how you use your humor to write "weird stuff" in such a convincing way.

And it's always interesting to see one series CSI character through another series CSI character's point of view LOL

Love it!

finnishsphinx November 2 2009, 09:07:40 UTC

Weird? What do you mean, all that stuff is prefectly normal.... LOL....or maybe not.

CSI characters are a lot of fun to mix and match... even though if you stop to think about all the three shows, the timeline and character combos here don`t really make sense.... ;)I just took my favourite parts from each show.