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trixxanna October 18 2008, 23:58:41 UTC
Nice start and can't help but grin thinking of the look Calleigh gave Eric (or the one Alexx will give him when she catches on)

You might want to look into find a beta, there were a number of typos and grammatical issues that a beta is sure to help with.

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murgy31 October 19 2008, 02:46:10 UTC
I loved it! It was great! I can't wait for more...

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alligator138 October 27 2008, 09:00:41 UTC
Yay! They talked! They kissed!

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