Fic: Revisited, Chapter 2 (Criminal Minds, Spencer Reid / Derek Morgan)

[finnishsphinx]

Comments

[lagolindari]

What?

WHAT?

I wanna know >___< ! Really hope next chapter will be up soon... I love how your fics are slowly getting more articulate, as the characters gain complexity and get more 'real'. Well done!

[finnishsphinx]

I gotta admit I was little worried about these two chapters because of the time gap between flashbacks and the "present". In the flashbacks Reid was quite timid and unsure of himself, in the present time he bosses Morgan around any way he wants. Time changes people and when they`ve been together a while he`s more sure of their relationship and himself. And a lot of fun for the writer.... ;)

[lagolindari]

Aw, yes, I love how he changed. I love bossy!Reid too... should give it a try myself sometimes :)!

Also... WHAT is it on that screen?? Need MORE!

[devon99]

Eeek, cliffhanger!!

Such a nice contrast between the boys then and now. Fab stuff:)

[moontreasurei]

*whimpers and tries to find the rest* I'll trade pizza for what has Spence's mouth hanging open. *puppy begging eyes*

[berryblue_girl]

You are so evil! I was sitting there, staring at my screen, shouting, "WHAT IS IT?" Update, quickly! Sarah