Comments | finnishsphinx: Fic: The Deal, Chapter 4 (CSI Miami, Ryan Wolfe / Eric Delko, NC-17)

finnishsphinx

Fic: The Deal, Chapter 4 (CSI Miami, Ryan Wolfe / Eric Delko, NC-17)

Jul 08, 2009 21:01

( Chapter 4 )

show: csi miami, -nc-17, csi miami / series: the deal, pair: ryan wolfe / eric delko

Comments 7

enoughtohurt July 8 2009, 19:06:44 UTC

OMG you updated again!!!

OMG Ryan sure is evil!!!

OMG I knew that that cum stain was gonna be a big problem!!!

OH MY GOOOOOOOOOOOOOD THEY KISSED!!!!!!

Did I say OMG? **THUD**

Really amazing chapter. I almost fell of my chair when Valera figured them out and they kissed. WOW!!

The scene in the locker room was so hot. Yeah, Ryan is evil and even mean, but I still think that he doesn’t really want Ennis to do something he doesn’t want, that he really doesn’t want to hurt him. He is considerate, under the circumstances, and he didn’t even pull Eric’s head while he was getting sucked. He didn’t make the situation uncomfortable for Eric. I know that Ryan has feelings and his escape from the lab at the end of the chapter shows that. He needs Eric and he is so scared of being vulnerable....He doesn’t want Eric knowing what he really feels, so Delko doesn’t play with his heart and hurt him.
And Eric already got it bad for Ryan. **sigh**

This is so much fun!!! I can not wait for more. Sorry for my English.

Thank you so much.

Tammy.

tainuli July 8 2009, 19:07:32 UTC

OMG! You can't leave it there!?! Thank you again for this fast update. :)

lillyg July 8 2009, 23:21:00 UTC

Ryan definitely need a shrink... Or two!

charlie_jae July 9 2009, 00:56:47 UTC

EGASP!

They've been busted... and now it seems that Eric wants more than Ryan asked for... hmm... interesting.

alligator138 July 9 2009, 06:57:54 UTC

Oooh, has Ryan got more than he bargained for?