tiny wee ficlet (note date. note way it predates other stuff)

[finisterre]

Comments

[vivwiley]

ahhhh....just lovely. Thanks for sharing this. V. much liked the line about honesty. Now, please go write more.

[amyhit]

i'm not sure if you're still around these parts at all, but regardless i'm feedbacking because, wow, wow, this - like pretty much all the past works of yours i've read - is very, very good. it's vivid, it's unique, and it's so simple on the surface that the depth of complexity underneath makes it feel surreal. i can't believe how much i believe this could have happened. it's a wonderful 'what if', wonderfully (if only briefly) realised.

[finisterre]

Hello,

I am still around these parts, though I've not been reading and writing in XF for a while. I can't thank you enough for all the feedback you've left; it was such a pleasure to get back from work and read such interesting thoughts. And constructive criticism! Hallelujah! I love that, so long as it comes at the right time and doesn't take the form of "U SUK!"

I'm going to reply to each one, but I wanted to say thank you here first.

*Edited for repeating myself*

[bmerb]

Whoa was this the seed for chapter 12 of U.I.?? I like this wee tiny fic

[finisterre]

I think, though I am not sure, that it was written first and posted on a list that Syntax was a member of. However, I seem to recall a friend of hers telling me that she doesn't read much of other's people's fanfic, so I am certain it's a coincidence.