Fic: Attention (Harry Potter -- Harry/Draco) PG

[kingzgurl]

Title: Attention

Author: kingzgurl

Fandom: Harry Potter

Pairing: Harry Potter/Draco Malfoy, if you squint a little

Rating: PG

Word Count: 1,075

Timeline: 4 years post-DH, EWE

All_Unwritten prompt the six hundred and seventy-fifth: “from the ground up”

Photo Prompt

Summary: Harry muses on the attention Draco receives when they travel to Japan.

Author's note: for

Comments

[moodwriter]

I adore you!!! Thank you, thank you, thank you. ^_^ It is so pretty and now I want it to continue. This is a prologue, right? Right? LOL. This would be such an amazing story. Draco and Harry in Japan.

This was wonderful. The one thing that I admire about your writing is the way you manage to... show how someone is beautiful without making it sound like you're just saying he's beautiful. It's very hard for me to explain this, but you make it a part of the story, how other people react and how it makes Harry feel and when you describe something, you don't use words that are... commonly used in fanfiction.

*hugs* This is marvelous.

[kingzgurl]

*blushes*

Continue? You tempt me, woman. My problem with that would be that I'd have to do research on Japan for it to be half-way believable, and I'm not sure I have time for that :(

Can I say how much your comment about my writing means to me? I don't even have words to describe it. I've always been so awkward about my writing (if you read the profile info, you'll understand why. So your comment truly does mean a lot to me.

[moodwriter]

Oh my god, I'm almost in tears here, because that's just wrong!! Nobody has the right to say something like that to another person. Writing is something very personal in a way, and in time you need to learn to take critique etc., but it should never be crushing. It should always be encouraging and something that makes you go forward, something that makes you want to be better, write better, learn more. Not something that crushes your writing spirit and kills your joy. *hugs

[kingzgurl]

What she did was wrong, and I've moved passed it, for the most part, but sometimes I still get unsure about my writing. I'm all for criticism, that's how we grow, but it shouldn't be delivered in a devastating fashion. My teacher told me those things when I was 16 years old, IN FRONT OF THE ENTIRE CLASS. When I had a better grade than 80% of the rest of the class.

I will definitely have to look into that book. It sounds incredible!

I might have been persuaded to continue this... I'll just have to see because I have a couple of other WIPs in other fandoms that I don't want to abandon JUST yet ;) But I will definitely take you up on your offer of helping me get the feel of Japan!

[moodwriter]

Yay! I'd be happy to help you. ^_^ Just tell me when you need me. ^_^ Hihii!! I cannot wait for more.