Ok, so I thought it would be fun to do a little informal critique on each other's fiction. The idea stemmed from
blessed_beast's
The Icon Truth Meme, for icon makers.
THE GREAT WRITE MEME- Comment with your username, and those willing shall reply with thoughts on any fiction, fandom or original, that you compose. That means it does not make a difference what
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Ashes dissolved into the thick black of a deserted city street, their owner held loosely by painted fingers encircled with leather. Moving suddenly toward the heavens, the lit object adjoined to a hellish mouth, chapped in scarlet by the dry cold. The hand brought it down again, and freed it from its grasp entirely.
To me this paragraph could be said so much simpler and still be atmospheric. But I think that's a matter of personal preference. :) I really do admire your writing a lot, you're not afraid to take risks and that's part of what makes your work so enjoyable.
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Most of my work is up at my oft-neglected website and not at my journal.
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The stories that you write are always believeable even when they are not canon. Like Buffy/Lindsey.
I also like the fact that you don't write smut, especially since smut seems to be so rampant in any fandom nowadays. Not that smut's bad but it's nice to see someone really work on developing a plot and the characters.
Your characterization is always on the ball.
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I love everything I've ever read from you, even when you've said you didn't like it much. You can write something that you say has no plot, and I'll never even think of that, because I'm too busy giggling to myself at the banter or chewing my lip, hoping everything will work out (even when I know it won't).
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I don't always comment, but I do read most of them.
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