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DOCTOR WHO/TORCHWOOD: Follow the Leader (Over the Cliff)

Dec 18, 2007 17:05

Title: Follow the Leader (Over the Cliff)
Characters/Pairing: Tosh, Ianto, Owen and Gwen, mention of Jack
Word Count: 2873
Rating: PG-13
Summary: With Jack gone, the team can't even really figure out who's in charge, much less anything else, and a trip to the Himalayas turns into more or less the end of the world.
Notes: I started off intending to ( Read more... )

character: dw: toshiko sato, pairing: dw: jack/ianto/toshiko, character: dw: ianto jones, pairing: dw: ianto/toshiko, character: dw: owen harper, character: dw: gwen cooper, verse: dw: one of us is gonna die young, fandom: doctor who/torchwood

Comments 9

kawaiispinel December 19 2007, 00:07:55 UTC

*flails* You know, I've always wanted to read a fic that focused on the Torchwood team during the events in TSoD, and you wrote it! *flails more* And it's amazing and wonderful, and just... perfect.

I could just here all their voices so perfectly, especially Owen, who, on a couple circumstances, made me have to stop reading just to giggle hysterically for a few minutes. (The bit about goats setting a trap for them, particularly, because it was just so him.) And your Tosh is just... Amazing.

...Yeah, I apparently fail at words right now. Umm... *flails more*

allfireburns December 19 2007, 00:10:52 UTC

*Glees* Thank you! It's my first time writing... pretty much any of the Torchwood crew for real, so I was so nervous about them and am so glad you like it and that their voices sound right. (Though I am very pleased about the cunning trap left by goats. ^^)

*Hugs gleefully*

chicafrom3 December 19 2007, 04:17:15 UTC

Your Tosh makes me Unspeakably Happy. ♥

and Tosh grabbed her laptop case as she pushed herself up, hoping it hadn't been damaged when they all hit the ground.

This wouldn't have happened if Jack were still around, and Tosh wasn't sure if she blamed herself more, or him for leaving in the first place. Sure, even when Jack was around they got kidnapped by cannibals, but that turned out alright. She didn't have the feeling that it would, this time.

As he did, the rest of their phones started beeping frantically too, with voicemails, missed calls, text messages...

"At least this time you can't say the end of the world's our fault," Owen said softly behind her. Tosh, unable to tear her eyes from the pink-orange-purple tear in the sky, unable to do anything else for fear of bursting into tears, started to laugh.

I want to quote the whole thing, really, because it's all so very them and brilliant and heartwrenching and funny and...yeah, I'm running out of adjectives. Just a really amazing, wonderful story that feels like canon. Or ( ... )

allfireburns December 19 2007, 04:41:29 UTC

*Glees!* Thank you. Tosh is surprisingly fun to write, and I'm really hoping to keep her around in my head. *Grins* And I am so very pleased you like it. This story? Made me want to bash my head into the keyboard so many times, but it was so much fun to write. I love the Torchwood crew.

Just a really amazing, wonderful story that feels like canon. Or better.
Best compliment ever. *Squishes and loves*

bibliotech December 23 2007, 22:15:17 UTC

Oh, those last few lines just kill me. I love this.

allfireburns December 23 2007, 22:24:56 UTC

Thank you!

meilin_miranda December 23 2007, 22:54:18 UTC

I wrote Torchwood-in-the-Himalayas myself, and I like your take too! :)

find_rightbrain December 23 2007, 23:01:45 UTC

Thank you!

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allfireburns December 24 2007, 23:16:37 UTC

Thanks! It was really fun to write, so I'm especially glad people are enjoying it. ^^