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TORCHWOOD: Morning is Almost Here (let it wait)

Feb 04, 2009 14:46

Title: Morning is Almost Here (let it wait)
Characters/Pairing: Tosh/Ianto, mention of Gwen, Owen and Jack, slight mentions of Jack/Ianto
Word Count: 1520
Rating: PG
Summary: The world actually doesn't end when Torchwood sleeps.
Notes: Written for myfanwys_nest. Because deadlines are apparently the only thing that get me to finish things. Set between S1 and S2 ( Read more... )

for: comm: myfanwys_nest, character: dw: toshiko sato, verse: dw: one of us is gonna die young, character: dw: ianto jones, pairing: dw: ianto/toshiko, fandom: doctor who/torchwood

Comments 14

kawaiispinel February 4 2009, 22:09:34 UTC

Hee. You know if the title didn't give it away for being a very 'you' title, I would have known this was yours, just because of your Tosh and Ianto adorable.

That said... WHY ARE THEY SO ADORABLE AND SAD? They make me so very flaily.

"Well, we're none of us exactly Jack, are we?"

*whimpers* That line just hurts. Kiiids.

allfireburns February 4 2009, 22:14:05 UTC

You have a point there. I am a sucker for the Tosh and Ianto. Or just Tosh in general...

That line is the entire reason I absolutely had to finish the fic. Because I got to that point and Ianto said that unexpectedly and ow, kids. I wasn't using that heart or anything...

panda_pooka February 5 2009, 03:04:10 UTC

Oh, owie. So very well done. Excellent.

allfireburns February 6 2009, 01:02:02 UTC

Thank you!

pecos February 5 2009, 07:29:02 UTC

That was so sad and lovely...kinda like Tosh herself. Thank you.

allfireburns February 6 2009, 01:02:58 UTC

Thank you! Tosh is one of my favorite characters to write - it's just so rewarding when I can actually get into her head.

fyrethief February 5 2009, 20:53:29 UTC

Ooh. I love the quietness in this - the subtlety. All the stuff there, bubbling away under the surface. All the little things, all the weight in the words unsaid. And a lovely image to end on! :)

allfireburns February 6 2009, 01:09:51 UTC

Thank you! I had the hardest time getting this story written because it's so quiet and low-key - I'm very glad it turned out the way I intended, and I'm glad you like it! ^^

fyrethief February 6 2009, 18:51:03 UTC

Yeah, I know what you mean. You need to keep the momentum going, without getting too involved - because then you'd lose the whole point of it! It's all about getting the balance right. :)

catvampcrazines May 27 2009, 06:09:41 UTC

So very well written--tangible strain and weariness with a sweet payoff/uncoiling at the end. I really enjoyed this and loved the ending.

Always awesome to see more Ianto/Tosh out there!

allfireburns May 28 2009, 00:14:44 UTC

Thank you! I really need to write more in this verse. ^^

catvampcrazines May 28 2009, 00:47:48 UTC

Would love to see that.

And that icon is brilliant, btw.