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[fighting4truth]

I'm going out for a scholarship and it's one where you have to enter in a piece of poetry.  I have gone through all of my poems and narrowed it down to two poems.  Now I cannot decide which one I should enter in.  Both of the poems are under the cut below. Please respond and just tell me which poem you like better and why. Thanks a ton.

Comments

[fearlessblue]

Honestly, if you could somehow connect these two poems to make them one I think it'll be an amazing poem. *Unless there's restrictions to how long it can be*
Reason I'm saying that is because to me it's trying to send a somewhat similiar message and both of them show what you want in life and what the other people around you should do. So that's my reasoning behind it, but I honestly don't think I could pick one or the other because they both have such a strong message.

[fighting4truth]

Hey, thanks for the feedback. That actually isn't too bad of an idea. There isn't a restriction on the length, and I think that because the two are so similar is why I can't choose between the two. I'll work on maybe condensing them into one.