Fic: Inlaqueo

[fifmeister]

Title: Inlaqueo
Fandom: Heroes
Characters/Pairing: Sylar/Heidi
Rating/Warnings: PG-13 for sexual themes and a bit of violence
Summary: Four ficlets, ranging from about 200 words to 500. All 5YG-verse of course; one takes place before 5YG and the rest after. Basically...we have Sex God!Sylar, Superman!Sylar, Babysnatcher!Sylar and Captive!Sylar. *

Comments

[fifmeister]

Thank you!! *flail* I'm super glad you liked it! I'm always intrigued by the depths Sylar can go with all his powers, since he always seems able to master them more thoroughly than their previous owners.

Thank you so much! *bounce*

[albion1919]

EEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE!! I bounced and clapped when I saw this!! \o/

1) DO MORE! Seriously Beth you can write sex scenes, they don't have to be explicit and what you've written is just as sensual! So good and damn his powers really do come in handy! ;)

2) His eyes are dark and almost emotionless; his fingertips hover over her face, barely brushing her cheek. “None of them means anything to me.”

OMG! I'm at once repulsed and feel the need to go awww, very twistedly romantic :x

3) Weeee Sylar!daddy! I love the image of him doing that, it's creepy but there's something tender and sad about it you know? I've wrote the same myself (not posted though)

4) So lovely! Heidi not going there to mock or cause him further pain. And the love that she felt is stilll there which must be so confusing, for all sorts of reasons!

I LOVE IT! *wiggles* :D

[fifmeister]

WHEEEEE! Consider it an end-of-uni present! ;)

1) *blush, shuffles feet* Hehe! If I ever tried to write explicit sex, I would probably have to put a bag over my head or something. :p I'm glad you liked it the way it was. And oh yes, sometimes it's not just the IA! ;)

2) I like that way of putting it! He's nothing if not twisted.

3) I've wrote the same myself (not posted though)

POST IT! *bounce* You do daddy!Sylar better than anyone!

4) Yeah, I was thinking that even after everything he's done, it still wouldn't sit right with her to see him tormented and caged up like a lab rat. And yep, there's conflict all over the place! ;)

Thank you muchly! :D *flappy hands*

[albion1919]

Thank you! ^_^

1) that's what I mean, you don't have to, it's still so hot! Now I'm wondering what else his powers are good for ;)

2) very much so. I was reading about Narcissistic Personality Disorders yesterday, the way they are with their partners and damn. Tough life .

3) I have! A few scenes that I didn't include or did but changed in other fics.

4) She's forgiving, I like that (Maya would prob step on his fingers :P)So conflicted, poor Heidi.

[fifmeister]

1) *sly grin* Someone should write an epic fic detailing all the creative ways Sylar can use his powers during sex. Maybe this year's NaNo... ;)

2) Ooh, interesting! Are you using that in your fic-writing, or is it just a general interest?

3) WOOT! *goes to read*

4) LOL, Maya would totally kick him when he's down! It's an interesting juxtaposition between the two of them--Maya's fiery temper versus Heidi's composure. I think I once saw Ann describe Heidi as an ice queen, haha.

[razycrandomgirl]

Dale Smither didn’t know the half of it, had no inkling of the full potential of her power. But Sylar does.

that's not fair she never had a chance!

It’s not his presence alone that startles her, threatens to release the scream wedged in her throat. It’s the little bundle he holds, soft paleness almost disappearing in the dark of his sleeves, rising just clear of the wooden bars of the crib.

Sylar and his babies. heheh

... actually that makes me sad. She's not a Petrelli. She's a Gray. :(

Whats "urple"?

ps Also I love that last bit. :X the whole think is so effin lovely. :x

[fifmeister]

Yep, poor Dale. I liked her. She did manage to gain some pretty good control over it, though.

Sylar and his babies. heheh

LOL, I know! He's collecting quite the brood. ;) I wouldn't write a full-fledged baby!fic, but this idea was floating around in my brain for a while, so I figured I might as well get it out. :p You're right, she wouldn't have any Petrelli blood in her, but I think she would take Heidi's name regardless.

"Urple" basically refers to writing that really goes overboard on the descriptions, so flowery and syrupy that it makes you want to throw up. It's from purple prose.

Thanks! Glad you enjoyed it. :)

Oh, and I'm curious about your icon!

[razycrandomgirl]

lol "Urple"

I pretty much do that all the time. It's kind like "doorknobbing" huh?

I can't find a link to tell what doorknobbing is so I'm gonna stop using it. :P

I adopt "Urple"
Oh, and I'm curious about your icon!
What do ya wanna know about it?

[fifmeister]

Oh, your fics aren't urple, you describe things without going overboard. Urple usually seems to turn up in really awful stuff, like Suefics. :p

I don't think I've heard the term "doorknobbing" before.

What do ya wanna know about it?

Why are the numbers out of order? And seeing as though there appears to be blood on it, is it a reference to Sylar?

[ibonekoen]

These fics were amazing and the first one was very well done, tastefully smutty. :D Sylar and Heidi, what an interesting pairing and I love the way you've kept them both in character.

[fifmeister]

Thank you! I'm glad to hear the first one was tasteful. And oh yes, I'm an unabashed Sylar/Heidi shipper, possibly the only one on the net. :p

[ibonekoen]

I've sort of rped the pairing, lol, but never written a fic. Although I have been tempted! I like playing in the 5YG verse, although I usually go the route of Peter/Sylar >_> *coughs*

[fifmeister]

5YG-verse is definitely fun to work with, all sorts of interesting potential. You should give in to your Sylar/Heidi temptations sometime! ;)

[top_hatted_girl]

Yes, yes, a thousand times yes. This is understated and wonderful and something one doesn't see so often in the wide, weird world of fanfiction. You have the art of subtle eroticism down. Oh, and best lines?

"Your pulse is racing," he says.
She snatches her hand away.

It's hard to describe the kind of genius that ends the story. Grotesque, tauntingly romantic, strangely real, in a way. Tangible. Anyway, a job well done.

[fifmeister]

Thank you so much! I'm glad you enjoyed it. This is the first time I've really made an attempt at any sort of sex scene, so I'm happy it was a success. :D