Fic: Hunter, Prey

[fifmeister]

Title: Hunter, Prey
Fandom: Heroes
Characters: Sylar, Maya
Rating/Warnings: R, violence, some blood and gore, character death
Word Count: 2,472
Summary: Sylar and Maya reunite five years following the events of "Powerless." Oneshot.
Notes: This is set in an alternate/possible future and does not incorporate any spoilers or other information about

Comments

[albion1919]

*FLIALS* OMG!! :O

Man that was fantastic, omg. I love the beginning, the way that you describe the heat was so intense, like you're there.

I can definitely see her changing like that, totally brutal.

But I’m still different from you in that way, Gabriel. I kill only those who deserve it.

That's chilling because that's his excuse to. That's the thing with her, I'm never sure if I should believe her remorse. Hmm.

I was saying to Cana last night that doing a Maya revenge fic would be tricky because I couldn't think of anything that would fulfil her anger, especially not killing him straight away, nothing would be dreadful enough. But this was soo disturbing, the way that you describe the tears gushing from his mouth *shiver*

I love your fics, I did a chair dance when I saw this :D MORE! \o/

[fifmeister]

WHEE! I'm so glad you liked it. :D

That's chilling because that's his excuse to. That's the thing with her, I'm never sure if I should believe her remorse. Hmm.

I know! She has a little more in common with him than she thinks. And yeah, that's one of the things that intrigues me about Maya--you can never really be sure what she's thinking. One minute she seems remorseful and even horrified at what she's done, the next minute she's practically defiant.

*nods* Particularly in this scenario, when she's had five years to think about it and plan it out. I thought about having her smack him around a little bit more before killing him, but given that it was fairly brutal at the end, I didn't want to go too overboard. :p

Heee, thank you! *happy blushing face*

[albion1919]

It's great!

She really does and she would not want to think on that! I remember Dania saying that Maya is a good person but what I've seen has given me second thoughts.

*nods* She's had time for the initial desire to just find and kill to fade into a vendetta as she gets control of her power and emotions. I'm going to do a revenge fic to and I was thinking about what to do. If he had any living relatives left she'd go after them first I think.

:D

[fifmeister]

Yeah, I remember that quote. It almost seems like at the beginning of the season, they want you to think that she's simply a good, innocent person who's gone through trauma that she didn't deserve and didn't ask for. It's only later on that she starts seeming darker, like when she begins to use her power on purpose and when we find out about Alejandro's wife.

Ooh, that's a great idea about her going after his relatives! Wipe the whole bloodline off the face of the earth, so to speak. (Papa Gray, perhaps? :D)

[sinemoras09]

AWESOME!! You've outdone yourself. Really this was pitch-perfect, everything you describe from the tears to the way Sylar's body convulsed at the end. I could practically hear his death rattle. Freaking COOL. Great job!

[fifmeister]

Thank you so much! :D *flappy hands*

[razycrandomgirl]

She was perched on the edge of the desk, leaning back on her palms, legs crossed at the ankle. Her mouth quirked in a benign, barely discernable smile. “Hello, Gabriel.”

Yeeeeeeah Boiiiiiiii!

“I wasn’t originally going to kill him, you know,” Sylar said. “I was going to let him-”

He didn’t see her booted foot until the instant before it smashed into his face. He toppled to the ground, still attached to the chair, and pain exploded through his head as it slammed into the concrete floor.

When his eyes and brain had resumed their proper functions, he saw Maya standing over him, radiating deadly calm. “You will never speak of my brother again,” she said softly. “Ever.”

A boot to the face!Hehe. She is not fucking around!

“I think a little reenactment is in order.”

Oh yes Maya! I love it

His whole body stiffened, and she held her breath. Jet-black fluid trickled from the corner of his mouth, then bubbled, then gushed, darkening his lips and trailing down his chin.

what a lovely image ...

=-o OMG I think I might be sick. :X

[fifmeister]

Hehe! Sorry, didn't mean to make you ill. You know she would do it, though! ;)

[razycrandomgirl]

I love that she kick him in the face a la "Bennet y Mohinder" lol

You create an undeniable landscape. Very well described. Very, Very well.
I just got unnerved by the mental image of Sylar's ruined head. *cringe*

[fifmeister]

Thank you! Yeah, that part was meant to be a little unnerving. *nods* Glad to hear I did my job. ;)

[dream_infinity0]

OMG maya is a bad ass in this fic. and i think this is the first fic i read of her killing him. i love it

I love how you wrote this whole thing of her getting her revenge on sylar...it was perfect..

i could see this happen on the show too but i don't think there kill him off.

great work

[fifmeister]

Thanks! Yeah, I would love to see something like this happen on the show--maybe not necessarily the killing part, but I definitely want to see her inflict some severe pain on him. ;) Thanks for reading!

[buckshotwon]

now this is the kind of maya i would love to see on heroes! not that naive/wimp, haha. GOOD JOB!

[fifmeister]

Thank you! I wouldn't say she's a wimp on the show, in fact I think she can be pretty gutsy when she needs to be, but I would love to see her be all hardcore and no-nonsense next season.

[buckshotwon]

Wimp probably wasn't the right word to use but I would definitely love to see her do a complete 180 in the next season in some way shape or form. This fic is the closest thing to that, haha.