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fierceputain

Of Violins and Short Skirts

Oct 11, 2010 01:01

Prompt: "All you're good for is being a whore and dancing around in a short skirt."
"Nu-uh, I play the guitar too. I'm totally good at it, I should like, perform or something... *vacant look*"

Figgins lets her play in front of the school. Santana is supportive but not expecting much. Everyone laughs when she comes out because she has a violin, not ( Read more... )

gen, glee, fill, prompt, brittany, fanfic

Comments 5

fatal_scribbles October 19 2010, 09:47:30 UTC

I loved this prompt, and I'm so glad someone as good as you filled it! This is fantastic!

Even though I think you made Kurt a little OTT- he's mostly very kind to Brittany, scorn like that he reserves for Rachel, and I think it would have been more prudent to give Puck those lines- I still loved this.

I love surprisingly talented!Brittany, and I was captivated by the way you wrote the performance. And all the little details like the broken strings and her eyes being closed really made it. Also, Sam clapping first, and Santana as a whole? Both totally IC, well done!

fierceputain October 19 2010, 11:11:13 UTC

PUCK. How did I not think of him? Inwas trying to think of another character, but Rachel didn't seem right because of the beginning and I just didn't think of Puck. After re-reading this, the lines are just so Puck. So thanks for helping centralize that :)
I'm glad you enjoyed it though. And I'll definitely post it to the other community.

fierceputain October 19 2010, 19:25:43 UTC

And by 'centralize' I mean realize. Stupid autocorrect.

fatal_scribbles October 19 2010, 09:50:05 UTC

Also, you should post this to the Brittany comm;
http://community.livejournal.com/thenicecheerio/

I'm sure they'd love to have it!

momoda6 October 19 2010, 15:58:58 UTC

This was epiccccccc. Way better than anything I could have come up with myself.

Becky doing a dance routine is cuuuute. The lanky kid is hilarious. RACHEL WITH PASTA ON HER FACE IS ONE OF MY FAVOURITE PARTS OF GLEE EVER. I have a screenshot of it saved on my computer as 'racheltheswampmonster.png'. The Brittany/Santana dynamic is sooo cute. And the string breaking was intense. I wouldn't have thought it would be possible to carry on with a string missing, so that's pretty pro. xD

THANKYOU SO MUCH. <3