Comments | fidelian: part deux

fidelian

part deux

Apr 14, 2009 23:20

Meeting the parents, or; hey, isn't that your mom? [2/2]
~1,500 || R (language)

( Okay, scratch that. )

pairing: pete/patrick, fic: chaptered, rating: r, band: fall out boy

Comments 24

extemporally April 14 2009, 22:16:03 UTC

Oh man, I loved this! It was sweet and funny, and OH BOYS.

fidelian April 16 2009, 16:55:31 UTC

Thanks so much, I'm happy you enjoyed it! Oh boys indeed. :)

panicmydear April 14 2009, 22:42:44 UTC

Oh, shit. Shit, shit, shit. “Ryan, are you drunk?”

Ryan laughs suddenly. “On love, maybe. I’m high on life, taking chances as one should. I shall prevail, in love and other areas of my life.”

AHAHAAAAA DUDE, RYAN IS SO MY FAVE IN THIS.

Pete nods, then pulls Patrick close and kisses him furiously. “Be careful, baby,” he whispers dramatically.

Pete, you drama queen. *eye roll*

“I heard him from my room,” Brendon says, looking like he’s trying not to smile. “He was… serenading me, I guess you have to call it.”

HAHA I CAN SEE IT! Just Ryan singing like a drunken idiot to Brendon.

Amazingness. Pure love. <3

fidelian April 16 2009, 16:56:32 UTC

Thank you SO much, I love seeing which parts were your favorite. :) Ryan and Pete are so much fun to write. Thanks again!

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fidelian April 16 2009, 16:57:26 UTC

Magic powers probably wouldn't hurt, yeah. THANK YOU, I'm so so happy you like it! :)

555gehenna666 April 15 2009, 10:18:22 UTC

Loved itttt <33
Memmsssss :D

fidelian April 16 2009, 16:57:56 UTC

Whoooo, thank you! :)

555gehenna666 April 17 2009, 00:43:04 UTC

You're very welcome :)

littleladypunk April 15 2009, 14:08:57 UTC

That was so funny :D

“Dude,” Pete says, “everyone knows you can’t serenade someone without a boombox. Has this boy no culture?”

xDD My fav, I think.

fidelian April 16 2009, 16:58:55 UTC

Well, no one should serenade anyone without taking some tips from Lloyd Dobler. :) Thank you so much!