[Supernatural]: A Sinner In the Hands of an Angry God

[minviendha]

Title: A Sinner in the Hands of an Angry God
Fandom: Supernatural
Prompt: From sharp_teeth: So many times it hasn't been Sam. Dean's not going to get fooled again. Not like he's expecting whatever it is to just come out and admit the truth.
Summary: So many times it hasn't been Sam. He's not falling for it this time.
Warnings: Violence, pain.
Notes: So...

Comments

[marziebarz]

OH GOD NO NO NO DEAN DONT STOP STOP NO NO!

*coughs* thats about all I was thinking until the very end of the fic, and then you had to do this -

I don’t need to be mad if you’ll just be okay

and BOOM. There went all coherency and self control and I'm still crying because its so true and just...just... /gross sobbing

and now that I have a little more control I noticed that you left it open-ended but the only way I can see this ending is death. I want to be positive and think that Sam makes a miraculous recovery but I think that this time he wont because there can only be so many close calls and the ambulance will be there in minutes but he'll already be dead. I USED TO BE AN OPTIMIST DAMMIT

[minviendha]

...:D? I LOVE YOU?

Honestly I do not even know why you are still friends with me when I do this to you all the time, seriously. But yeaaaah basically that, and um I am really sorry for doing terrible things and not fixing any of it, and I'm pretty sure that this one ends in dead!Sam and Dean too but I couldn't quite make myself write it all the way to the end.

I USED TO BE AN OPTIMIST DAMMIT

I AM GETTING TO YOU

[marziebarz]

YOU ARE GETTING TO ME. Prepare yourself for all the angsty Sam and Cas ideas your prompting has given me. Theres kind of a lot =P

If you weren't such an awesome person I wouldnt have this problem of always reading your depressing stuff. Be less awesome. Then I will cry less haha

[monicawoe]

Brilliant! What a terrifying idea!

[minviendha]

Thank you! I can never say no to terrifying ideas.

[emmram]

Oh god, I love you.

[minviendha]

I love you too?

[de_nugis]

Ow. Ow, ow, ow, ow. Thank you. Ow.

You see my thoughts have a wonderful coherency.

I like the way you set up the case in the background, and the fact that for this particular case Dean's experience is going to feed into the supernatural illusion rather than fight it, because he knows how very possible it is that Sam could not be Sam.

And poor Sam, trying to make Dean forgive himself at the end is as doomed as Dean trying to keep Sam from bleeding out. It's hard to see this ending any way but suicide.

I'm so glad you wrote this -- you were the perfect person for this prompt.

[minviendha]

Thank youuu so much, I'm glad you liked this one. That prompt has been staring at me for all these months and I'm glad it finally happened because it was such a good prompt and thank you for making it happen. Because this probably wouldn't have without that prompt.

Yeah - like the prompt itself, this just seemed like such an ugly possibility, but also a total possibility that could very easily happen particularly with just a little nudge in the right direction. And yeaaah I'm a little sorry about the ending, I played around with making it okay but it wasn't working out in my head, and anyway enough tl;dr.

Basically THANK YOU GLAD YOU LIKED IT and I'll leave it at that.

[vail_kagami]

I feel so fortunate that when I read one of your stories I don't make the mistake of expecting anything but TOTAL HEARTBREAK!

I find some off comfort in Dean planning to kill himself. At least they'll be together and he won't have to spend his life dealing with this.

Yeah, with your stories, I have to take what comfort I can get. Poor Bobby, though.

[minviendha]

Heheheheheh...yeah sorry. D: It's not even like I start out intending things like this to happen...all the time. Like this one, it was almost a happy ending and then it just...wasn't. D: D: D:

...basically. There is no way this one's going anywhere good, but they can be okay in the afterlife, yeah? Um.

Poor Bobby. *guiltface* See my embarrassed disclaimer on FFN. XD

[jagfanlj]

Oh, gods, poor Bobby. *huggles Bobby* All I can say is, whatever the thing is that's messing with perception had better high-tail it out of town before Bobby gets there.