Fic: Turn to the Aims and Desires of the World, Erica/Jack, NC17

[damelola]

Title: Turn to the Aims and Desires of the World
Fandom: V (2009)
Pairing: Erica/Jack
Rating: NC17
Spoilers: set between 1x12 and 2x01
Summary: Written for Porn Battle prompts red, sin, forbidden, hands. When Anna instills fear with Red Sky, Erica and Jack seek a little comfort from one another.

Disclaimer: Not mine, not for profit.  Just borrowing, and

Comments

[simplelyric]

This is superb. The tone feels spot-on for Jack's voice, and the scenario is believable and sexy with a bittersweet, almost haunting edge. Thank you for writing and sharing!

[soaked_in_stars]

I love everything you have chosen this to be. I mean, first of all, YES and so deliciously hot and forbidden and conflicted and yesyesyes. And second, LINEBACKER. SPICES. GUNS AND SASS. Just yes.

[eternal_moonie]

AWESOME story!

You should post this on v_fic!

[lule_bell]

Omg... I can actually see this happening - all playing out before me as I read it. I love the juxtaposition and the constant inner dialogue. You captured them both perfectly and gave them both exactly what they need. I really love this, bb.

[squeakyboots]

This is terrific. You made me 'ship Erica/Jack and I barely watch V.

My favorite part: There's a moment when he realizes what he's doing, but before he can stop, Erica leans into his hand. Under the strands of hair he feels the sudden heat of her cheek, and it's almost like an electrical current pulsing through his arm at the simple contact. Her eyelids flutter closed, and for a moment he's free to look his fill without fear of questions or propriety. This simple act of touching, the warmth and softness of a beautiful woman beneath his hand and Jack knows the die is already cast.

Fabulous.