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Fic: The Right Thing, Final Chapter (6D), Miranda/Andy, NC17

Jan 24, 2011 06:38

Title: The Right Thing (part 6D/6)
Author: damelola
Rating: PG this part, NC17 eventually
Pairing: Miranda/Andy
Word Count: ~7500 (this chapter). The whole story clocks in at approx. 57000 words.

Disclaimer: I don't own anything, these characters remain the property of Lauren Weisberger and 20th Century Fox. No profit is being made, and no harm is ( Read more... )

pairing: miranda/andy: fashionably hot, femslash, chr: andrea sachs intrepid reporter, rating: nc17, chr: miranda priestly snow queen, story: the right thing

Comments 21

writtensword January 24 2011, 09:57:26 UTC

WoW!! What a great final chapter!! :D

I really loved it! I enjoyed the interactions with Lily and Emily (I'm glad she gets to go back to England!). And the kitchen scene and the trek up the townhouse floors... wow... I kind of melted. ^_^

It was very well-written! I loved your choice of words and the fresh constructions of your sentences!
Beautiful!

Thank you for sharing!

damelola January 25 2011, 15:53:36 UTC

Thanks so much - it means a lot coming from a good writer like yourself!

worst_liar_ever January 24 2011, 11:54:03 UTC

what a wonderful ending. I agree about emily. She was great. I especially love the line about her defying the laws of physics.
Really well executed as well. I hope to see more from you!

damelola January 25 2011, 15:38:22 UTC

Thank you so much - and there should be more from me in the near future!

flyhiwithme2 January 24 2011, 14:07:32 UTC

So good. So worth the wait. You could have gone so many directions with this last chapter and I loved the way you went with it. Thanks for a great story.

damelola January 25 2011, 15:37:24 UTC

Thank you - it took me a while to settle on this direction, so it's wonderful to hear that it worked for you :)

mayireadtoday January 24 2011, 17:31:45 UTC

Awesome: "Miranda’s eyes narrowed at the sarcasm; a little hypocrisy on her part given that it was essentially her second language, just edging out French."

This made me grin: "Being around Miranda was never easy, but it turned out that in one very important regard, she had almost simple tastes."

This was great.

damelola January 25 2011, 15:35:00 UTC

Thank you - and I was pretty proud of that French line, I must confess :)

eh_hee January 24 2011, 22:27:18 UTC

amazing chapter.. I've said it before but it bears repeating I just love your Miranda.. so sexy ;) Really loved the ending, I'm looking forward to reading more of your DWP fics. Cheers.

damelola January 25 2011, 15:34:22 UTC

Thanks so very much! Miranda is devilishly sexy, I'm just pleased I got to play for a while :)