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Dear generally lovely author on a certain original fic comm,
Your prose is, as always, beautiful, your grammar flawless, and your characters interesting. However. I don't know if you just lost interest after the characters hooked up or what, but if someone has been thoroughly mindraped, his memories of the love of his life stolen by his own brother, someone he loved and trusted, don't you think he'd have some kind of reaction to that? Anything? It's called mindrape for a reason, sugarplum.
And another thing. I'm an unaffiliated theist who thinks that religion focuses too much on conformity and not enough on morality, but even I'm offended by your portrayal of religious people. You make such a big deal about how he (the brother) is proof that religious people aren't all OMG self-righteous and willing to do anything for their faith, and then you have him do that? For his faith?
Um, go fuck yourself. You were right the first time. You can be religious and a good person, I swear.
Your prose is, as always, beautiful, your grammar flawless, and your characters interesting. However. I don't know if you just lost interest after the characters hooked up or what, but if someone has been thoroughly mindraped, his memories of the love of his life stolen by his own brother, someone he loved and trusted, don't you think he'd have some kind of reaction to that? Anything? It's called mindrape for a reason, sugarplum.
And another thing. I'm an unaffiliated theist who thinks that religion focuses too much on conformity and not enough on morality, but even I'm offended by your portrayal of religious people. You make such a big deal about how he (the brother) is proof that religious people aren't all OMG self-righteous and willing to do anything for their faith, and then you have him do that? For his faith?
Um, go fuck yourself. You were right the first time. You can be religious and a good person, I swear.