The Quiet Assassin 8/44

[fictionfreak15]

Title: The Quiet Assassin
Author: fictionfreak15
Beta: gwencarmichael <--- my backbone
Pairing: Adam/Tommy, Tommy/Kris(in the beginning)
Disclaimer: This story is 100%, complete, absolute fiction and apart from the OC's, I do not own the mass collection of characters used within
Warnings: angst, prostitution(past and mention of), contracted murder, rape(as well

Comments

[isolde13]

This fic...I don't even know...I'm in thrall to it, bb. In thrall.

I absolutely love the dialogue here, the mystery of Adam, the fact that you can see he's trying but so unaccustomed to this.

Love. Oh, and I pimped this left and right on twitter :)

[fictionfreak15]

*hugs* :):):) You're so sweet, sugar! I'm blushing! :D

Awww thank you! I absolutely love writing dialogue sometimes that doesn't sound like the way ppl talk now a days. And I'm so glad you noticed about Adam!

Heehee, can't beat a good pimping, bb. You're too good to me <3333333

[fritzie2a_t]

See ?! Told you Adam wasn't all bad !! Lol. He's going to take care of Tommy.And I hope he never meets that person out there that will be better than he is. Can't wait to see how this relationship between them is going to play out. Good chappie !!

[fictionfreak15]

;) I remember about six months ago thinking I would never post this for a few reasons, one of them being that Adam kills ppl. Didn't think it would go over so well, but I considered there were some redeeming qualities in this, so I just decided, what the hell, you know?

MMMmaybe he will, maybe he won't! ;)

I can't wait to show you! Thanks so much, babe. :)

[fritzie2a_t]

I don't mind that Adam kills people. I think he has redeeming values...I think he is a very lonely person. Given his occupation, I guess he has always been a solitary person. Can't really have many friends,or even a social life, can't trust anyone. But he is drawn to Tommy, just as Tommy seems to be drawn to him.So, I think they would be good for each other, they both need someone. Ergo, they fall in love and live happily ever after.... insert *nod* here mmmmhhhmmmmm, that's what I believe.Lol,I'll just write my own happy ending here ! But seriously, love the story and can't wait to see what else you have in store.

[cunningdeb]

So loving this ... having visions of that old tv show Kung Fu, hearing Adam say something like 'patience grasshopper'

BTW that's something I say to my daycare kids when they want something NOW and they look at me like I've lost my mind LOL

Huggles
Deb <333

[fictionfreak15]

*giggles* I always liked the flashback parts in that show, tho I was really young when I used to watch so I can relate to the kids lol, I do remember the grasshopper thing lol He does have sort of that mystic sage thing goin' on, dun'he ;)

Thank you Deb! Love you soooooooo much! *glomps*

[fictionfreak15]

My mom watched it a lot too when she was younger, but only b/c she kept waiting for Bruce Lee to appear and finally show us what REAL Kung Fu was LOL!!1

[funsize93]

I don't even think Adam knows how sweet he is, which actually makes him cuter ;)

The way Adam talked about how "someone" will eventually kill him and how it was fate, was really deep. Its a little like saying that everyone dies--no one likes to hear it, but its the truth. But I guess in Adam's line of business he thinks about it more than others would. I hope he stays alive enough to be there for Tommy!!!!!!! Oh, wait, he kinda answers that, "I am alive now...and I can protect you."

I feel like I've been spoiled by getting updates everyday bb haha :) love love love it!
Love you so much honey!
xoxoxo funsize <3

[fictionfreak15]

IKR?? My beta totally fell in love with him in this chapter *chuckles*

Yeah, Adam's not in the habit of sugar coating things. His 'knowledge' of his future killer is a comment on mortality, but it also comes from the fact that I know no matter how good one is at something, there's always someone better out there somewhere, and it allows you to keep from getting your head swollen about shit lol Adam's the absolute BEST in the city, but he knows he shouldn't be too confident when it comes to his life.

Aww, I'm so glad you picked that line out! It's the beginning of a beautiful relationship ;)

I know! I love my beta for sending the chaps back so quickly! I'll be updating tonight as well, just wanted to do some talking first :) Love you, baby!! muah! Thank you so much for reading this! *hugs*

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[i_glitterz]

First off, I laughed at Deb's comment..anyways...

I love this story so much Caris and I just can't fathom enough how glad I am that you're posting it...

Adam is just so mysterious and just so..idk..wanting to help Tommy, but like, not knowing how?? Idk

Tommy is in one of those stages..I can tell...this is where he swoons over his hero, lol, but I love him swooning!!

Hugs,
Glitterbaby

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[fictionfreak15]

Teehee. I hadn't thought of it that way, but it certainly seems like that. The mentioning of 'Temple masters' kind of adds to it too lol I just never know what ppl are going to react to!

Awww, I'm becoming more and more glad that it's not hidden in my notebook anymore :)

Hey, bb, how do you get italics in the comments box?? Anyway, Yeah! Adam is sort of presh when he doesn't really know how to express himself lol

Heehee, swooning! It's boardering on worship huh lol, but he's just so jazzed that someone would even care anyway.
Thank you so much for commenting, my wov. Next chapter is coming up!! Muah!