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Harry Potter | Lavender/Parvati | Keeping Secrets

Feb 07, 2009 01:10

Fandom: Harry Potter
Title: Keeping Secrets
Characters: Lavender Brown, Parvati Patil, mentions of others
Pairings: one-sided Parvati/Lavender
Rating: PG
Word Count: 382
Summary: She doesn't like keeping secrets from Lavender.
Notes/Warnings: for my 10lilies claim

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pairing: lavender/parvati, femmeslash/yuri, character: lavender brown, character: parvati patil, rating: pg, fandom: harry potter, !heron_advocate

Comments 10

turtle_goose February 7 2009, 20:36:37 UTC

Oh, this was WONDERFUL! I really love this. It's so hard to find good chick-slash and you did such a great job with this! I love the whole Parvati-Lavender dynamic and you did a fantastic job elevating that (even if it is one-sided) to something more! Love, love, LOVE it!

♥

heron_advocate February 8 2009, 02:31:15 UTC

Thank you! I feel like the end is somewhat lacking, but otherwise I'm generally pleased with it. You inspired me a bit, actually. I don't generally use repetition but I've seen it in your stuff a few times, so I thought I'd try it. :)

turtle_goose February 8 2009, 02:37:40 UTC

:D

I'm a repetition whore. ♥

the_void_68 February 8 2009, 12:03:19 UTC

Very nice, simple but effective. Great fic. :-)

heron_advocate February 8 2009, 19:12:27 UTC

Thanks. :)

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heron_advocate February 8 2009, 19:12:45 UTC

Thank you!

mamabasto February 8 2009, 14:51:36 UTC

That was a very heart felt story. Brings back a lot of memories... :D

heron_advocate February 8 2009, 19:13:08 UTC

Yeah, I think everyone's been there at one time or another. Thanks for the comment.

holyfant February 8 2009, 15:36:49 UTC

Lovely.

heron_advocate February 8 2009, 19:13:22 UTC

I'm glad you liked it.