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What If

Mar 08, 2010 08:07

( Kris woke up in the middle of the road, glass shards shining like so many stars on the asphalt. )

warning: character death, katy, kradison, words: 5000-9999, author: ficdirectory, future, rating: pg-13, title: what if

Comments 10

shai285 July 7 2010, 00:41:32 UTC

Aww... this is kind of heart breaking. I really love the way you wrote this story. It's very unique. I love that Kris reached out to both Adam and Allison, but it breaks my heart that his family will never know.

Great story :)

ficdirectory July 7 2010, 02:12:18 UTC

Aw, thank you so much! I'm really glad you liked this!

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ficdirectory July 7 2010, 16:30:17 UTC

Thank you so much! <3

xoboshoexo July 12 2010, 19:37:14 UTC

beautifully written and so completely heartbreaking but i loved it. great job!

ficdirectory July 12 2010, 20:08:09 UTC

Thank you so much! I'm glad!

kiri_no_yami September 9 2010, 21:58:48 UTC

TT.TT Wow, I've never read a body-swap fic quite like this one. I think u did an amazing job describing the times they were going thru, but it was so heartbreaking...

ficdirectory September 9 2010, 22:44:41 UTC

Thank you so much. I've never actually heard of body-swap fic before. This was just written to fill a prompt that someone once requested. So glad it came across well, though. I really like this one, too.

yumipitz September 18 2010, 05:27:37 UTC

This is... WOAH.

You can still expand this, yah know :)

ficdirectory September 18 2010, 12:00:39 UTC

Thank you.

And, I've heard, yes. But I think it's done. :)