FIC: Stillness

Jan 07, 2012 09:56

Title: Stillness
Fandom: Swordspoint
Ship: Alec/Richard
Rating: PG
Word Count: 1,055
Warnings: None
Summary: It's the quiet moments that Richard values the most.
Notes: Written for Yuletide 2011. Three years of Swordspoint in a row!

Stillness )

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_profiterole_ January 7 2012, 18:26:02 UTC
Lovely! <3 I need a Richard for my cold feet as well.

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lelek January 7 2012, 18:41:02 UTC
Thank you! It really is a nice image, isn't it? :)

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manyfacesofme22 January 7 2012, 18:40:35 UTC
Ohh this was great. You have the essense of these two down exactly. Richard's descriptions of Alec are gorgeous.

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lelek January 7 2012, 18:41:54 UTC
Thanks so much! I really do love them, even though I don't write much for this fandom. I'm glad you enjoyed it!

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omen1x2 January 7 2012, 18:49:31 UTC
Beautifully done, truly. I'm in a full-on Richard/Alec mood, and this couldn't have come at a better time. ♥

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lelek January 7 2012, 23:18:04 UTC
Thank you! That's so nice to hear! :)

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just_ann_now January 7 2012, 19:49:45 UTC
Oh, swoony swoony swoony swoony swoon.

This is just gorgeous. Your characterization is perfect and your language is, too. I really enjoy stories about that fleeting period when everything was right, everything was good for the two of them and you've just created it wonderfully here!

I'm trying to pick out highlights, but, really, every single bit of this is magical, the surprising mellowness and calm between them, Richard's acceptance that it won't last forever and determination to savor it to the fullest, and Alec being almost - almost - loving.

*Happy sigh*

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lelek January 7 2012, 23:19:13 UTC
You leave wonderful comments, thank you so much! This really made me smile.

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engarian January 7 2012, 21:24:54 UTC
This was perfect, and what a joy to read on a busy Saturday between customers. You just made my weekend.

- Erulisse (one L)

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lelek January 7 2012, 23:19:33 UTC
Thank you! That's high praise, I really appreciate it!

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