Prompt Post 2.0

Jun 23, 2012 14:58

With the season finale behind us I figure we'll have an explosion of prompts soon. So, new prompt post. Please post any new prompts in this post. But you can always find fic or fill more prompts in the original prompt post.

Rules!1) One prompt per post, please! If you have multiple prompts, no worries, just make separate posts for each. Please ( Read more... )

lin beifong is my hero, sparkle bush, prompt post

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Re: The girl in the iceberg (4/?) anonymous July 9 2012, 23:38:29 UTC
Between one thing and another, it took almost a year to reach the Northern Water Tribe. The sages refused to cross even the smallest stream on Naga, so they had to hire boats to cross everything-but not the main ferries, that was too noticeable. They travelled at night, both for cover and because they were at their strongest then, took the least-charted roads they could find, and went far out of their way to avoid any Fire Nation soldiers. Or rumours of Fire Nation soldiers. Or possible chance of Fire Nation soldiers.

“Aren't they busy hunting waterbenders?” Korra grumbled at Naga. Her hands, though, were gentle as she plucked thorns out of her friend's paws, and Naga barked agreement, then licked the side of her face. Korra laughed.

She supposed they must have wandered through a good part of the Earth Kingdom, but she hardly saw anything. The few times she tried to slip off with Naga, just to look at the different villages, the sages dragged her back before she'd gone more than a few hundred feet. It was almost as boring as staying in the South Pole.

Well, more boring, probably. If she'd stayed the Fire Nation would have captured her by now.

Korra practiced her waterbending in what spare time she had, sneaking earthbending and firebending when nobody seemed to be looking. They both came so easily-especially fire, which should have been her opposite element. But she didn't know what to do with them. Even with water, she knew there was so much more she could be doing.

Her thirteenth birthday approached as they wandered the northern coast of the Earth Kingdom, and they didn't seem to be getting any nearer. Even in the Earth Kingdom clothes Tekku had found for them all, people mostly gave them suspicious looks when they asked about the Northern Water Tribe. The most helpful strangers just laughed when Tekku asked about hiring a boat, and said that the city had been walled off for the last decade or so, when the Fire Nation first attacked.

“Tried to attack,” said an apple merchant, smugly.

Korra felt a thrill of pride. Holding off Fire Nation armies year after year? Now that was waterbending. They were just the people to teach her what she needed to know.

I'm the Avatar, she wanted to say, and I'm here to save the world! Just tell me where to go. But if they knew, they weren't talking. The best directions Tekku got were “keep heading north, I guess.”

The sages squabbled over exactly how to go about heading north without risking Korra. Any boat small enough for them to manage with waterbending would likely get smashed on the ice. A larger one would need a crew. Only a master waterbender could have any chance of crossing the ice on foot-and a slim chance, at that.

By the night before her birthday, Korra had lost all patience with them. It wasn't that she usually had a whole lot of it, but she had at least accepted that they knew what they were doing and would actually get her there, eventually. But now it looked like they'd rather just sit around and talk about how impossible everything was until Fire Lord Sozin took over the whole world.

“Naga and I-” she began.

“No, Korra,” they said, all together. Korra was half-tempted to slap them down with water whips, shoot fire and then just run away-but they had done a whole lot for her, and were risking their lives for her, and besides, it might not work. She sulked against Naga for a quarter-hour, then tried to think. She couldn't sneak away. She'd tried that before, and Naga was just too big to hide. Korra was much faster and stronger, though; without their waterbending, they'd never catch up with her.

There was no way to take away their bending, though. And really, she wouldn't even if she could. Bending was who they were. But if there were only some way to stop it just for a little while-

Something tugged at her mind-a vague memory of shouting and crying, desperately wanting to bend, but somehow unable to do it, her hands and feet going numb as she struggled. There'd been something around her wrists and ankles, something almost soft: leather, or some sort of cloth.

Korra looked thoughtfully at the bands wrapped around her arms.

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Re: The girl in the iceberg (4/?) anonymous July 9 2012, 23:40:25 UTC
She waited until the sun rose and they made their camp for the night, even kicking off her boots and curling up against Naga. Her heart was pounding, and she had to force herself to calm down enough to hear the sages' breathing. She waited for it to slow down, deepen, shift into low snores. Then she prodded Naga awake and immediately hushed her. Saddling her as quietly as she could, Korra kept shooting nervous glances over her shoulder; the sages didn't so much as twitch. Then, still barefoot, she crept over to the sages. Korra forced her breath to stay calm. This was her only chance; if she ruined it, she'd never have another.

Korra took out her armbands, each torn in half and soaked with water. She looped them around the sages' wrists and ankles, tying them as loosely as she could. Tekku stirred slightly, muttering to himself.

She held her breath, not daring to move. He drifted back into sleep and Korra slipped back to Naga, shoving her feet into her boots. Then she bent all the water in the bands into ice.

“What?” Tekku jerked awake, then stared down at his frozen wrists. “Korra, what are you doing? Korra!”

The other sages woke up as she clambered onto the waiting Naga.

“Sorry!” she said, and bent low in the saddle. “Naga, go!”

They took off, Naga only too eager to run after days of forced inactivity. Korra only caught a glimpse of an Earth Kingdom village as they thundered through, almost knocking over some people at a vegetable cart. She shouted an apology and they headed straight for the ocean. Korra hesitated only a moment; then, glancing back, she saw her mentors running after her.

“Korra!” they shouted. “Come back! You don't know what you're doing! You're-”

“Time for a swim, girl,” Korra whispered to Naga. She braced herself.

Naga leapt into the freezing water. Korra wrapped a ball of water around them, hanging on with her knees. She could breathe; they were free.

Her euphoria lasted for a full twenty minutes. By then the air within the water-bubble had run out and she had to pull Naga up so she could breathe. Even though she bent all the water out of her clothes, she was still bitterly cold, and she had almost no supplies. As night came on, it only grew worse; she had to bury her face against Naga, breathing through her fur, just to avoid feeling as if the air were slicing its way down her throat. Even Naga grew tired; they collapsed on an iceberg and looked around them. Korra saw nothing but an endless sea of water and ice.

She wasn't prepared to admit, though, that the sages had been right. They hadn't been right. This might be a harder way than she'd expected, but it was still the only way.

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Re: The girl in the iceberg (6/?) anonymous July 9 2012, 23:41:24 UTC
Once Naga had rested, they started again. Korra slept on and off, recovering enough energy to keep keep the ice from injuring Naga, occasionally catch fish, and warm her face and hands with fire. Beyond that, she could only keep them headed north; she had a good sense of direction, and it was all the direction she had.

Korra was slumped against Naga when a half-familiar sound jerked her awake. A ship-no, several ships, by the sound of them. She sat upright, looking around; she didn't see any. Some of the snowflakes drifting from the sky, though, were black. The sages had always warned her to keep an eye out for black snow, because it would mean the Fire Nation had finally come for her.

“They're here!” Korra dug her fingers into Naga's fur, trying to force her sluggish mind to keep working. If they caught her, everything would be over.

But if they were attacking the Northern Water Tribe, they could lead her straight to them.

Korra urged Naga downwards, holding her arms out to keep the water flowing at a safe distance. For the first time in her memory, it seemed to resist her, the current struggling against her hold. She barely had the strength to keep gripping Naga with her legs, but they had to go on. They made their way forward, Korra half-bending and half-swimming, then emerged, gulping for air. Korra struggled to keep her eyelids up and peered into the distance. She could see them, now-a dozen bellowing Fire Nation ships, sailing full-steam for the northeast. Another had crashed against a nearby slab of ice.

The wind was howling and the snow so thick that she could hardly see. That was why the water had fought her; a storm was coming.

Fire Nation soldiers poured out of their sinking ship, onto the ice. Korra, half-numb, wondered if she should try to help. Before she could decide, one of the soldiers pointed at her and shouted something.

Two flames shot right over her head. Korra would have gladly returned returned the fire, but she didn't know how, not properly-not against real firebenders-and she was very, very tired. She grabbed Naga's reins and dove back into the water, trying to bend them to safety. Korra managed to propel them a few hundred feet through the water, but no more. The wild current finally escaped her control, sweeping their bodies deeper into the sea. Water filled Korra's nose and mouth, her grip on Naga's reins loosened, and her mind began to dim. She was going to die.

Korra's eyes few open, glowing white. Her hands tightened again, back into fists; her fists pressed together; her body, of its own volition, righted itself in total indifference to the laws of nature. Then the powerful current swirled around her and Naga, and froze into ice.

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Re: The girl in the iceberg (6/?) derawr July 12 2012, 19:46:10 UTC
This is great! I really like this!

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Re: The girl in the iceberg (6/?) anonymous July 13 2012, 17:41:25 UTC
So... this. There should be more of this. Now please yes?

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Writeranon! anonymous July 14 2012, 19:27:21 UTC
Thanks to you both, I'm glad you like it! I've been busy with college, but I'm going to try and get back today.

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Re: The girl in the iceberg fill (7/?) anonymous July 15 2012, 08:26:35 UTC
Noatak didn't know if he were angrier at Tarrlok for being a spineless whiner, or at Yakone for frightening his little brother. He settled for a combination of both and walked in sullen silence. He didn't even know what their father had threatened from his sickbed--for once, Noatak hadn't been there. He could easily imagine it, though.

Behind him, Tarrlok's boots thumped lightly against the snow. Tarrlok drew a breath, as if about to say something-then let it out, then gathered himself again, then stopped, back and forth, over and over again. Noatak was starting to twitch every time he heard Tarrlok inhale.

“Will you stop it?” he snapped.

“I'm sorry,” said Tarrlok, his voice low. As usual, it rang with sincerity--and misery, even without Yakone here.

Almost despite himself, Noatak felt his fury bleeding away. It always did. His temper ran cool rather than hot-his and Tarrlok's both, suitably enough for waterbending prodigies, but sometimes Noatak thought he could almost feel his native ice crackling inside him, spreading through his veins. He had seen the anxious, wistful looks his brother sent his way, even if he didn't know what to do about it.

Noatak protected Tarrlok as much as ever-more than ever, when it came to their father, and if there was none of the laughter or games he remembered from before, neither brother had time for them. First there was waterbending, day in and day out, and on top of it, bloodbending or hunting-or, most often, some combination of both. Not just on full moons, now. Noatak's mind was full of everything he had to do and be, and Yakone's plots against the Fire Nation, and worrying about Tarrlok.

Even Tarrlok, he was sure, didn't suspect the last. Noatak dreamed of running away, escaping it all, but then he always remembered Tarrlok: too young to survive the wilderness, too Tarrlok to bear their father's expectations alone. Sometimes Noatak dreamed, too, of the ice slowly overtaking his body until he was just a sculpture of himself, then creeping beyond him, climbing up and over Tarrlok as well. Every time, he woke up perfectly stiff, his skin cold and clammy, and fled to the nearest cliff. His mind ran in circles over his father's plan, his destiny, his brother's-his baby brother, still, more helpless than any bloodbender had a right to be.

Noatak cast a furtive glance over his shoulder. It was impossible to stay angry at Tarrlok for very long, anyway-it felt like kicking a baby seal. Unless you were Yakone, of course, and frankly Noatak thought him perfectly capable of kicking every baby animal unlucky enough to cross his path. Humans included.

“What's your problem, anyway?” he asked. “You're not getting queasy over hunting, too, are you?”

“Nah,” said Tarrlok.

“Besides, it's just us. No Dad, no bloodbending. That should cheer you up.”

Tarrlok was a wimp about bloodbending, even though he'd just managed it under a half-moon. Noatak was better, of course. Noatak was also three years older, which nobody but Noatak himself seemed to have ever considered. He was still convinced that Tarrlok would be every bit as good as he was, or nearly, if he could just get over this stupid block. But still. It was nice to hunt without all the bloodbending drama, for once. And it was definitely nice to get away from their father.

Tarrlok gave a startled laugh. “Okay. Yeah, it does, some.” His heart sped up. “You're not going to make me bloodbend?”

“Me?”

“You could. You're stronger.”

Noatak didn't know if he meant size or bending or what, and didn't much care. There was a sick, twisting sensation in his gut that he hadn't felt for a long time, since almost the first time he'd bent an animal. “I'm not going to force you to bloodbend!”

“Well, thanks.”

Noatak felt strangely insulted.

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Re: The girl in the iceberg fill (7/?) anonymous July 15 2012, 08:55:54 UTC
Oh wow, I've just found this story and... wow! It's so amazing, I love your portrayal of everyone, please write more!

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writeranon here :) anonymous July 15 2012, 23:05:36 UTC
Oh, thank you very much! I never thought I'd be trying to get Aang, Gyatso, young Noatak and Tarrlok, and Korra right, all in one story, but I've been trying and, of course, I'll keep it at it.

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Re: The girl in the iceberg fill (7/?) anonymous July 16 2012, 07:10:13 UTC
OH MY GOD. OP hasn't been on the kink meme in a little while but this is absolutely the best thing to come back to. I'm really enjoying this fic so far anon, keep up with the good work!

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Re: The girl in the iceberg fill (7/?) anonymous July 16 2012, 18:09:26 UTC
Writeranon--oh, awesome! I hoped you'd like it, even if it veers from the prompt a bit.

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Re: The girl in the iceberg fill (7/?) anonymous July 17 2012, 07:36:12 UTC
After a moment of mental flailing, he settled on a reason for it.

“I’m not Dad.”

“I know that,” said Tarrlok, after an infinitesimal hesitation that screamed in Noatak’s ears.

“And I’m not like Dad, okay?”

The hesitation was longer this time. “Okay, Noatak.”

Noatak whirled around, the butt of his spear smacking the ground. He was just fast enough to surprise the same expression on Tarrlok’s face that he’d seen hundreds of times before, but only ever directed at their father. After everything he’d done, everything he’d put himself through because mustprotectTarrlokmustprotectTarrlokmustprotectTarrlok still circled endlessly in his brain, Tarrlok was afraid of him. How dared he look like that at him--look wary, as if Noatak were a wild animal that might attack at any moment--

“I can’t believe you,” he snarled, and even he knew that couldn’t help but things worse.

Instinctively, Tarrlok stepped back, then held his ground. His face had already smoothed over, even as his heart pounded in Noatak’s ears. When had Tarrlok learned to do that? What had he started hiding things--hiding things from Noatak?

“I said you weren’t like him,” said Tarrlok, his voice short and snippy and perfectly younger-brother-ish. If he didn’t know better-- “What else do you want? I’m not going to pretend.”

“You are pretending!” Even Tarrlok’s heartbeat had begun to slow down. But Noatak could tell he wasn’t calming down, not really. Tarrlok was controlling his own pulse.

It’d been years since bloodbending had bothered Noatak. He could bend every wolf in the North Pole without a qualm. This, though--this seemed far more perverse and unnatural than anything Noatak had ever done. As bad as Tarrlok thought normal bloodbending must be.

“You’re pretending you’re not afraid of me,” he said, brows snapping together and dropping into a scowl. “You’re bloodbending yourself! I can hear you.”

“Well, you don’t have to listen,” said Tarrlok sulkily. “It’s practically eavesdropping. And I’m not afraid of you! I mean, sure, for a moment, but that’s only because you surprised me.”

His face was still carefully blank. Still wary. A few feet to their right and many more down, the ocean roared; the hunting route had taken them along the southern shore. Noatak felt everything, the moon and the sea and the snow beneath their feet and his brother’s blood mingling together, calling to him.

“Stop lying.”

“Fine,” said Tarrlok, and the creepy empty look vanished, replaced by anger. Even that was a relief. “Yeah, it scares me, and half the time you scare me too. You’re a completely different person now!” He waved his arms. “You always used to play with me and look out for me and-- These days you look like you want to feed me to the wolves when you even remember I’m here! I never know what you’re going to do but it’s always horrible!”

The water swept halfway up the cliff, unnoticed.

“Oh, grow up, Tarrlok,” Noatak said, if less forcefully than he’d have liked. “Playing games won’t help us get revenge on the Fire Nation.”

“I don’t care about stupid Dad’s stupid revenge. I just want to save our tribe!”

“--and I am looking out for you! I protect you all the time and maybe if you weren’t such a weakling then I wouldn’t have to be perfect every moment of every--single--day!” He punctuated the last three words with furious smacks of his right fist against his left hand.

Tarrlok’s arms swung wildly downwards. “I’m not weak!”

Sea-spray splattered over Noatak’s left cheek. Frowning, he glanced over the edge, and his eyes widened. The waves were bursting upwards with each of Tarrlok’s careless gestures.

“Uh--”

“And you’re not perfect, you’re a monster! You like it, I know you do! You like torturing those helpless animals! What’s going to be next? Wild polar beardogs?”

Noatak scarcely heard him. “Tarrlok, you need to stop!” He lifted his hands to try and bend the water back down, but it'd built so much power by now that he didn't have much hope.

“Oh, I guess I’m next? Or maybe Mom--”

Noatak shot him a panicked look. The water had so much momentum-- “Shut up and help me bend!”

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Re: The girl in the iceberg fill (8/?) anonymous July 17 2012, 07:37:09 UTC
Arrrgh, the post above should be 8.

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Re: The girl in the iceberg fill (9/?) anonymous July 18 2012, 00:41:11 UTC
(this one's short, sorry)

“I’m not shutting up! Yeah, I bet you don’t want to hear--” The waves were slipping out of his control, loud enough that Tarrlok broke off and followed his gaze. “Wait, help you bend what?”

With an ear-splitting roar, the waves burst free, surging up and over the cliff. The land between them split open. Tarrlok shrieked, finally lowering his arms, though it couldn’t help now; Noatak, abandoning all efforts to control the ocean, sprang over the widening crack, bending the water beneath him into an icy slide and flinging himself towards his terrified brother. His body smacked straight into Tarrlok’s, sending both of them flying into the wall just as the entire side of the cliff splintered. They both screamed, desperately bending frozen footholds out of the cliff. Noatak encased the lower halves of their bodies in ice.

That was all that kept them from flying off and falling to their deaths--or at least, to severe discomfort. Instead, their chunk of the cliff crashed down, into the ocean. One last wave swept over them, soaking them both. Coughing, they freed themselves from Noatak’s ice-hold and crawled towards each other, Noatak helping his brother sit up.

Tarrlok, his outrage forgotten, stared up at the broken cliff in wonder.

“Did I do that?”

“Congratulations,” said Noatak dryly. He couldn’t help but think of the dozens, if not hundreds, of times he’d said Tarrlok would be a great waterbender, if he could just get over himself. “Tarrlok?”

Tarrlok rubbed his eyes and looked again. He shook his head. “Yeah?”

“I told you so.”

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Re: The girl in the iceberg fill (9/?) anonymous July 19 2012, 06:32:45 UTC
I was bout to get upset with you for stopping there, but then I realized that you update fairly regularly. Thank you, writer!anon!!! I can't wait to get to the MEAT of the story, I'm just so excited! By the way, how old are Tarrlok and Noatak here??

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Re: The girl in the iceberg fill (9/?) anonymous July 19 2012, 19:33:52 UTC
Heheheh, I try. I hope the next part works out! (*fingers crossed*)

Noatak is fourteen and Tarrlok is eleven.

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