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DRA(W)BBLE DUEL #3

Sep 29, 2009 19:51

Dra(w)bble Duel #3 is CLOSED for sumbissions and voting! :D

Prompt of the week: Friends & Family

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submission wwmrsweasleydo October 1 2009, 16:45:13 UTC

Title: Plus Guest
Team: Ron
Rating/Warnings: PG
Wordcount: 386
Prompt: Friends and Family
Disclaimer: I do not own Ron and Draco (if I did the books wouldn't be suitable for children any more).

You are cordially invited to join Mr Percy and Mrs Audrey Weasley in a celebration of the birth of their daughter, Molly Cedrica Weasley.

Ron stared down at the embossed card. He stared particularly at two words. To Mr Ronald Weasley the invitation began. Then it said plus guest. Did he dare? Were they ready? It was the perfect occasion. There would be other guests there and so his family would even have to be polite, or at least, they would be less likely to cause a scene.

Would they expect him to bring Hermione? No, they would have named her if they did. Had she received her own invitation? Would she be there? Would she bring her own plus guest? Did that make a difference to whether he dared or not ( ... )

VOTE pat_nosferatu October 1 2009, 17:08:06 UTC

I love it!!!! I wish Draco would appear in my kitchen sleepy and naked.......daydreaming.......

Re: VOTE wwmrsweasleydo October 4 2009, 16:45:46 UTC

I'll just organise that for you then.

Thanks.

Vote alhendra October 3 2009, 09:18:44 UTC

Loved the indecision and the worry gnawing at Ron throughout the piece...very realistic!

Re: Vote wwmrsweasleydo October 4 2009, 16:47:18 UTC

Thanks. I'm glad you thought it was realistic. I was trying to make it hesitant but I'm not sure that the tone and flow came across properly.

VOTE bishounenblaise October 3 2009, 13:06:15 UTC

I love this. I love that he's thinking about all these things. It's easy to see why he'd be so nervous, that he'd want to get everything out in the open, but just 'not yet'. It's a little heartbreaking. This one is my favourite, I think. great job!

Re: VOTE wwmrsweasleydo October 4 2009, 16:48:15 UTC

Wow! Favourite? Given the company I'm keeping that's a helluva compliment! Thanks!

VOTE colorcapsule October 4 2009, 12:31:15 UTC

I second to the three above me aksdjhaksjd♥♥

Re: VOTE wwmrsweasleydo October 4 2009, 16:49:16 UTC

Thank you thank you thank you! *is grinning*

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