FIC FOR SCORCH66

[hyphen_chan]

For: scorch66
From: alienashi

Title: in parallel futures, in untold pasts
Pairings/Characters: Kame/Nakamaru
Rating: PG
Warnings: Mafia AU, quasi-dystopian, and er, some kind of angst (ymmv, but I'm afraid I might have overdone it?)
Notes: Dear scorch66, this is really awkward, because I didn't expect to get you in my first ever exchange, so I stalked a lot of the past

Comments

[pineappleribbon]

It was so wonderful and awesome. Beautiful and sad. You bave a great hability to write, because the vagueness you used to describe this world is perfect, you can live it even without so much details and thats beautiful. You can see the moment everything, all the pieces fit. It was really great to read. NaKame is my otp and i'm happy to see such a awesome fanfic with them. The love they have for each other even if it dont have many words and encounters. Is so beautiful that I had the wish to cry at the ending. Also the way you describe the characters. Kame was such a intersting one, with such a power since a kid even if he dont have a choice. And even like this, he was really a great boss, I can imagine his determinate look. But you can see he wanted what all people want and enjoy life, play baseball in the university. And just because of that, he met Yuichi. I had to say their meeting was really really cute, all the words and what you made us imagine. Just like their love. I loved all the words all occult implications of their feelings, the way you described it. Kame is feared and admired but its lonely at the top. It breaks my heart to see them suffering so much. Yuichi know someday Kame will have to kill him but he also don't want to dirt Kame's hands with blood, it's so heartbreaking. Just like Kame almost pleading to Yuichi to never betray him. Not just because of loyalty but also becase he don't want to kill him. I really liked too when you changed the story to Taguchi, and the way he told what happened with Kame and Yuichi, a traggic cute love story in this obscure world. My heart really broke when Kame wrote the post it. I had such a will to tell them its gonna be alright... If my heart hasn't broke enough already it broke even more when I read Kame became more reclusive and lonely