FIC FOR ALIENASHI part 5

[hyphen_chan]

For: alienashi
From: scorch66

Title: No Sugar, No Cream
Pairings/Characters: Nakamaru/Kame
Rating: PG13
Warnings: AU, violence, cursing, mentions of euthanasia
Notes: Before anything else is said, I’d like to say: I know.
Summary: Nakamaru is a small town police officer who transfers to a branch in the city in hopes of making a real difference. He’s partnered to

Comments

[scorch66]

♥♥♥!!

love the character developments, most especially kame's because you can see the changes that occurred to him thru yuichi's influence
\*____*/ I love how you picked up on how this story began with the illusion that Nakamaru would be undergoing some transformation but despite all that happened, his character remained strong and consistent; his ideals chipped at the edges later on, but he was more influential than influenced. It was Kame, the ever stubborn one, who gave into him this time and it was such a new, fun way to write their dynamics since I usually write them reversed, with Nakamaru being all 'sighsigh *waves white flag*' ;D

at first i thought the story is going to be on the comedic side with nakamaru bumbling while kame teases him a lot as the plot
crying, ME TOO. idk where all the darker plot came from? T__T I just wanted a little bit of action to get them going and flare the tension between them but then I didn't want their relationship to develop too fast and undermine their characters. So. I added more.. and more... and then 44k happened somehow fhjkds it was necessary though, imo, because the trust had to be built between them first; it made the pay off sweeter <3 Thrilled that you enjoyed the KT-member cameos ♥!

Thank you so much for your wonderful feedback ♥! you totally knew it was me, didn't you hfdjsksj OR DID I MANAGE TO FOOL YOU?

[abyssinian13]

KNEW IT => (insert me guts-posing here)...

the dark tones sort of thrown me off at first because i'm used to fluffy nakame from you but i'm not quite sure what stuck to me to think that this is from you..maybe it was your yuichi's thoughts..this might be in an au setting but how he deals with things and people (especially kame) and happenings gives off same feels as your other fics (i see hints of dentist!Nakamaru in him)..

with Nakamaru being all 'sighsigh *waves white flag*' ;D - and i think nakamaru loves to indulge kame so he lets him win..but here i see more yuichi going heads on with kame and not taking kame's treatment lying down, so yeah, it was definitely refreshing to see that and yuichi actually winning..

and yay for 44k worded fics with lots of character and relationship development happenings..those make the reading worth the while..

[scorch66]

YOU SMARTY PANTS DETECTIVE, YOU <3

Yes! The genre was definitely different from my usual but the core dynamics were the same--there were lots of parallels between this fic and Found My Way, sob, but I don't know how else to write nakame fdhsjk this is how they work for me. So happy they work for you too ♥!

Thank you so much ;o; ♥♥♥