FIC FOR RYOGRANDE

[hyphen_chan]

For: ryogrande
From: sashjun

Title: Step by Step
Pairings/Characters: Nakamaru/Ueda
Rating:NC-17
Warnings: feelings
Notes: Hi there ♥ I really hope you like this. I also hope there isn’t too much feelings in this for you, but they just wouldn’t go away. 6558 words. Thank you to my cheerleader and to my beta ♥
Summary: Nakamaru likes Ueda. And Kame says Ueda

Comments

[ext_1497137]

yesssssssssss omg i actually have no clue who you are so good job on that. i have absolutely no problem with the feelings, the feelings are welcome, especially after the feelings weren't accepted at first and MY HEART BROKE. but i like it, because it's different. i like that they stayed friends, that nothing was (too) weird between them, and that eventually ueda came to appreciate everything extra nakamaru did for him because he loved him

[sashjun]

I'm still surprised you didn't know this was me, but I am a little pleased :D

Anyway, I' glad I made you signing up wort it :D Thank you for all the lovely things you said ♥

[abyssinian13]

so cute..
flailing at kame playing matchmaker for ueda and yuichi..love that he insists in ueda making a love song for yuichi..
and lol at kame for reading fanfictions about je bands..i can just see him do that and compare them to fics starring him and whoever he is paired with..i love the kamexryo moments too.
enough kame flaling..

i love the flow of your story..i like the shift of ueda and nakamaru's relationship from friends/band mates to lovers..i like that mostly nothing changed with how they treat each other after they talked about yuichi's feelings, only ueda seeing more of yuichi that he did before..the first kiss b/n them, hot..the resulting awkwardness, expected..good thing that didn't last..
and that love song confession (thank you kame), i love very much..i like it that you included ueda's creative side here..

that last scene made me laugh..i wonder what tatchan said to ryo about kame..poor kame.

i had fun reading..thanks for sharing!!!

[sashjun]

I'm happy you had fun. I like reading how people view these things and what made the fic fun so thank you very much for this comment.

[wintersdancer]

Anon, I really loved this fic! I usually can't read Ueda in pairings (don't ask why, I have no idea), but this fic was worth it :D I loved how Kame was involved and played matchmaker and how he read fanfictions xD And Ueda rejecting Nakamaru at the beginning kind of broke my heart, but I'm glad everything went okay in the end ♥

[sashjun]

Sorry for breaking your heart a little but I'm happy to hear I made Ueda work for you :D Thank you for a lovely comment.

[jtriskell]

[sashjun]

Thanks for reading

[mousapelli]

wow, I loved this. The buildup was perfect and I really liked following Ueda working his way up to it, and the sex at the end was hot and sweet and just the best thing. Really nice job!

[sashjun]

:D That makes me happy to hear you liked this. It was interesting writing it from this point of view so I'm glad it work out and people liked it ♥