FIC FOR JE_LEVY

[hyphen_chan]

For: je_levy
From: ayame_hadouken

Title: What the Water Gave Me
Pairings/Characters: Taguchi Junnosuke/Tanaka Koki
Rating: NC-17
Warnings: untoward thoughts, misuse of the bath, breathplay
Notes: This is all for you, darling je_levy. I hope you enjoy this; it's always a treat to make words happen for you. Thanks to S, K, and K for idea-sounding, keeping me in check, and beta

Comments

[alienashi]

wow author-san how do you word

i really love the careful nature of the entire fic, like there's a line they want to cross but they want a way to cross it with least...trouble, so to speak, and it makes it all the more kinkier. this hardly reads like a pwp at all, more like character study with the porn as the device, good job!

[ayame_hadouken]

sometimes it happens? i wonder sometimes too, honestly

thank you very much; i knew where i wanted to go, but i knew that it shouldn't be too over the top, if that makes sense?

<3<3<3<3<3

[starg8fan_liz]

wonderful fic *_*

[ayame_hadouken]

thank you <3<3<3

[wintersdancer]

Hello Anon!
I really liked this, how peaceful it was, if it makes sense. I loved the pace and how they were almost studying each other, especially Junno. Thanks for writing this :D

[ayame_hadouken]

it does make sense :D

thank you for reading <3<3<3<3<3

[lwootz]

Sorry for the delay in responding to this, but I do want you to know, dear author, that I couldn’t be happier. I mean the fact that you used Florence alone had me because omg, I LOVE her music and just the way the song title is used here is EXCELLENT. I should mention that only after I’d read the fic, I looked back at the summary and you totally put me in an ridiculous state of glee as I was paralyzed with lol. Hahaha I love it omg

Ok, so this is PERFECT.

Ever since that poolside photo shoot, Junno hasn't been able to stop thinking of it.

I may or may not have been on the exact same train of thought for that photo shoot by the pool and I may or may not have been pretty vocal about it because YES, I WANTED THIS.

He wonders if Koki would ever let him try it for real.

Hahaha yes, Junno would at least entertain the option that Koki’s down for it, because it’s Koki. God knows, he’s pretty much down for anything.

…hadn’t deterred him from wanting to press his lips against Koki’s before winding one hand into his hair and pushing him

[lwootz]

“What are you waiting for?” he asks, voice nearly a purr. “I thought you wanted to do this.”

Aughhhh *________* I do like saucy!Koki in fic. I so do.

“I do,” Junno says, hands scrabbling at his own clothes. “I do, so very much.” He joins Koki, nearly scraping his back against the faucet.

He did this, he made Koki dependent upon him, and it’s even better than he’s ever imagined.

Holy crap. I love that this is in fact the cusp of it; the underlying scope of why he wants this.

This time Koki shuts his eyes. Through the water he looks like he should be a fairytale protagonist, and Junno concentrates on the way Koki’s heartbeats thud against the hand he’s got flat against his chest. They’re steady, not at all frantic, and Junno thinks that maybe his heart is the one about to shake right out of its cage.

I need to applaud this line. The image you created here and I’m crazy about things like that, feeling heartbeats and that sort of thing >.< HOW DID U KNOW??

“You have two options, Junno.” Koki coughs a bit, and his voice is a

[ayame_hadouken]

ugh thank you man

i just want to save this comment forever

but yes, that photo shoot needed to be addressed, just sayin' and really, it was only natural to use florence-words; it went hand in hand, i think, with the whole thing.

i'm just so pleased that you enjoyed it, and ugh, it was so fun to write. seki had to help keep me in check, you know.

<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3

[sashjun]

this was hot in the creepy way breathplay could be. I loved the easy way koki accepted it at last and ugh all the image ♥__________♥

[ayame_hadouken]

thank you very much :D <3<3<3<3<3