FIC FOR YUUMEI_NATA

Mar 22, 2013 23:45

For: yuumei_nata
From: beltenebra

Title: Echos of Another Life
Pairings/Characters: Junno/Kame, brief mentions of Koki, Ueda, and Nakamaru
Rating: R
Warnings: AU, Brief mentions of non-central (non- KAT-TUN) character death
Notes: I really enjoyed writing something quiet and meandering. yuumei_nata, I hope this is the kind of story you will enjoy! Huge thanks to my beta for ( Read more... )

year: 2013, rated: r, p: junno/kame

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krysyuy March 23 2013, 08:59:43 UTC
It seemed to work, Kame smiled back which brought the butterflies back full force.
Little touches like this throughout the fic, reflecting how the other makes them feel, just made me melt. I'm such a sap. >.>;;;

At that Junno got out as quickly as he could without it seeming like he was fleeing and hoped like hell that fifteen minutes or so in the locker room would help him calm down.
I can relate so much to how Junno (and Kame) both freak out about the other. lol Appearing calm on the outside but inside, it feels like they're gonna burst with nervous energy. XD

He had traded his scrubs for casual clothes - a t-shirt, leather jacket, and jeans that transformed him from a really hot doctor to a really hot... something else. Frankly, he looked like a model. Who needed legs that long anyway. But his smile was soft and bright and Kame found himself relaxing.
Ugh, I love your descriptions.

Kame blinked a few times, stunned, before he found himself giggling helplessly.
*_________*v

"[…] All of the cakes, the sugar flowers, and gold decorations and all of it edible - it just looked like magic."
I just love this line and the images it evokes.

The kiss was soft and affectionate, the slide of Junno's lips lighting him up with sensation. No one could blame him for melting into it. Junno responded by tugging him a little closer.
YAYYYYYYYY THEY KISS ASJDHSAJKFHASKFFHKJHFS And it's so sweet and romantic and perfectly fitting for the lovely, quiet tone of the fic.

I loved this so much, anon, you don't even know. Your Kame and Junno were such a delight to read. Adding to mems and definitely reading again soon. Kisses for you!


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beltenebra April 4 2013, 15:37:14 UTC
Oh man, this is such a wonderful comment, I think I must have read it like three times with a giant grin on my face. XDDD

I loved reading all of your reactions to different things. Thank you so much for reading and taking the time to write such lovely feedback!! <3<3<3

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