FIC FOR KRYSYUY

Mar 25, 2011 17:24

For: krysyuy
From: uepixie

Title: Disposable
Pairings/Characters: Kamenashi/Taguchi; implied past Akanishi/Taguchi
Rating: G
Warnings: AU
Notes: Hey krysyuy! This pairing was an interesting challenge for me so I really hope you like the result ^^
Summary: Kamenashi works at a photography store, selling cameras and developing prints. A story begins to unfold before ( Read more... )

year: 2011, p: jin/junno, rated: g, p: junno/kame

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yararanger April 5 2011, 14:44:14 UTC
stupid LJ had to die and eat my comment, didn't it =_= /kicks LJ

I'm really glad you liked it! I was super-uncertain, so your positive reaction reassured me a lot, too XD; *squishes* Thank you for leaving a comment! ;o; ♥

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yararanger April 5 2011, 15:18:53 UTC
I was almost scared to track the comments honestly, just in case nobody left any! XD;; (Ostrich approach ftw u_u)

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krysyuy March 25 2011, 23:39:06 UTC
OMG, YOU WROTE ME KAME/JUNNO. (W/ IMPLIED PAST JIN/JUNNO.) I'M IN LOVE ALREADY. ♥______________♥

-runs to read-

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krysyuy March 26 2011, 07:29:01 UTC
I am completely in love with everything about this fic - this universe you created is quiet and beautiful and very sweet. Plus the Kame POV was so well-executed and very in-character, I thought. And I love AU, so that's another plus there as well. 8) Your prose was detailed without being too detailed, giving the reader a clear setting, while also moving the character and story forward.

Also, can I just say how ecstatic and happy I am that you wrote me Kame/Junno? I feel like most people wouldn't have wanted to take on the challenge, so I completely and totally flailed like an idiot when I saw this. ;_________; So, so so happy. Really, you have no idea.

Some of my favorite parts below. I may or may not have quoted more than half the fic. .______. Sorry for my running commentary (and if I get repetitive). orzzzzz

On days like those Kamenashi would drop by his grandparents' place on the way home and bring them extra groceries so they wouldn't have to carry as much back from the store.This is just very sweet and says so much about his ( ... )

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krysyuy March 26 2011, 07:30:05 UTC
(cont’d)

Kamenashi found himself smiling even after the door closed.


He almost hadn't realised that these were Taguchi's photographs; the mood was so different somehow. Kamenashi tried to place his finger on it. Not lonely, not sad, nothing like that… just… a little distant?
:( :( :( Makes me so sad for Junno.

There was something closed-off about the expression on Taguchi's face. OK, next. Kamenashi wasn't sure what to think. He felt inexplicably sad. OK, next.
;_________;

That same distance was on Taguchi's face even up close; a tiny tightness around his eyes, his smile not quite wide enough. Kamenashi wondered how it was that he could tell so easily.
I love that, after following Jin and Junno's story for so long, Kame can see the difference in expressions.

Something made him look up then, seeking unnecessary eye contact, but Taguchi was looking down at the photographs. Their fingers brushed against each other's lightly as Taguchi picked them up and tucked them inside the breast pocket of his coat.-inner fangirl squeal- = - ( ... )

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krysyuy March 26 2011, 07:32:20 UTC
(cont’d)

"Hi," Taguchi grinned, and Kamenashi didn't realise that he had automatically smiled back at Taguchi's free, happy expression until Taguchi's smile brightened further still.
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"I figure it's time to get something a little more… permanent. Photography seems like a good hobby to take up, right?"
I see what you're implying, Junno. I SEE IT. /shipper-tinted glasses

"Ne, Kazuya," he said - how they had gone from 'Kamenashi' to 'Kazuya' in less than an hour was still a blur - "will you be my tutor?"
Ah~ You included one of my favorite things~ Junno calling him Kazuya. -insert more hearts and sparkles here-
... )

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iside89 March 26 2011, 00:56:08 UTC
I don't know if the best part of this fic is all the photography stuff (I love photography), the KameNo, Kame's PoV, Kame being a photographer, Junno being a model (!!♥!!), Junno being awesome, the sweet ending... I really can't choose *_*
The description of the photography work is so... aww, as buzzbird said, it makes this job sound so romantic. I really liked it. You are so good at describing feelings! *_____*

"Maybe it could… develop… from there."
♥ Sweet pun is sweet.

Thanks for this fic~ *_*

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yararanger April 5 2011, 14:47:52 UTC
HEY YOU 8D I know we talked about this a little on twitter but I wanted to reply here too ♥ I'm really, really happy that you liked this ;o; I feel like I've become better able to understand Kame because of your translations of his 'Kame Camera' segments which might have been partial inspiration for this fic so I kind of have you to thank for a lot of this, too XD;; ♥ *hugs*

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iside89 April 5 2011, 21:51:31 UTC
SJHFDSJAFDKJFSSAKGFASF *O* I was indirectly connected to this fic and I didn't even know it! I'm so honoured :3 I was useful ;A; ♥ And I'm so glad that you wrote a KameNo+photos because really, it's such an awesome and lovely AU I can't even *_* (Photographer!Kame and Supermodel!Junno, like, really, I've never pictured this scenario in my mind before but it's just PERFECT ♥)

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kt_kitt March 26 2011, 09:41:01 UTC
ahhhh so cute!!!!!! lovely ending!!!

thanks for sharing!!!

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crovoxisikes March 26 2011, 10:22:00 UTC
kameno!!!!! haha..u sure make krys over the moon right now ♥

"Maybe it could… develop… from there." <-- awwwwww......

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yararanger April 5 2011, 14:48:53 UTC
heyyyy Peeps :D ♥ haha I'm really glad it made Krys happy, and I'm glad you found it sweet too X3 ♥ *hugs*

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