[FIC] Blushes and Giggles (PoT) (for sonkikyo)

[cairnsy]

Title: Blushes and Giggles.
Author: Cairnsy
Fandom: Prince of Tennis
Rating: PG.
Challenge: Ryoma/Sakuno & Eiji/Oishi for sonkikyo

Comments

[bobbissimo]

♥ ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥

OMG!! I love you. I love this. Love, love, love, squeeee!

*clears throat*

And now for the coherent version of this review:

A few little nit-picks: Sakuno's definitely a blusher, but not really a giggler. I also wish there was a little more Golden Pair involvement. Like, maybe a bit of their POV on the date, too. Otherwise, this was pretty damned good! I love the way you wrote Ryoma (quiet, except for when he's being a tennis dork, haha!!) I also liked the "There's bad gay, and there's Golden Pair gay" LOL. Some 12-14 y/o's would totally think that way (I would know. I've been there and done that.) The smile and kiss at the end was cute. I do so love the kinds of romances that are more subtle, and where actions speak louder than words. You did a lovely job with that.

Anyways, thank you for writing this. ^___^

[cairnsy]

Oh, sorry about that! It's been a really long time since I saw anything from the series, and I was a little worried I might be getting Sakuno wrong. I'll give it a look over in the next day or so and fix up some of those giggles ^^. I'm glad you enjoyed it despite that little mess up, it was a surprsingly fun piece to write!