Hehe, this was great! Shin is one of those characters that's hard to write as the instigator (without him coming across as OOC), but this? Totally worked. Loved the humor here too, especially in the last paragraph XD
Thank you! Frankly, I can't quite picture Sakuraba as taking the initiative either - Shin, at least, seems to have a backbone, but Sakuraba seems a bit ... timid at times. That might just be me though. ^^;
Heh. Thank you! Shin, I think, likes to ponder things for a while (well, not on the field, but off of it, I can imagine him taking some time to think things through) and then when he's done, he acts - contrary to Sakuraba who (no offense to the poor guy) just thinks. And then thinks some more - it takes him a looong time to actually decide on a course of action, and more often than not, other people act before he's fully made up his mind.
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That last paragraph was too much fun to write.
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For sure Shin would act before sakuraba when he does understand that he needs to act XD
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