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May 19, 2008 11:28

Every Mask has its Story PART SIX
Elise

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mask story, 100 ways, brian campbell, ryan miller, steve bernier

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capshockeygrl May 19 2008, 15:49:02 UTC
I respectfully repeat my first comment from the last chapter.

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fic_of_elise May 19 2008, 15:59:28 UTC
Thank you. I've finished this story, so im in a really weird mood. I get really emotionally involved in my stories, so I'm a little spent. Does that make sense?

Anywho - thank you for commenting. I'll comment proper when I'm not in a weird mood.

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capshockeygrl May 19 2008, 17:50:25 UTC
It totally makes sense. Generally, when I've read a series all the way through, start to finish (such as your 100 ways, because it was written before I joined this little shindig), I'm emotionally drained (ok, when its well written, anyway). So I have an inkling of what it must feel like to so emotionally involve yourself in writing it.

In general, I think your readers take the journey with you, if not a little behind you. As I sit here now, emotionally involved in this story, I have hopes for what will happen and fears about what will happen. If that makes any sense...

The best stories I tend to keep saved on a jump drive so I can go back and read through them anytime.

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fic_of_elise May 19 2008, 19:12:21 UTC
Yeah, the journey is the most important part for me. I want to take people on a story-ride. I want them to feel what the characters feel, and to think about the dynamics of relationships, etc.

So, i'm glad i've succeeded thus far.

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buffalorinkrat May 19 2008, 19:03:45 UTC
Oye...this is intense. I understand how Ryan feels. Cancer is scary from every perspective. I can really relate to this, it's difficult to read at times because its so raw for me, but it makes me feel like I'm not alone when it comes to a loved one facing cancer.

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fic_of_elise May 19 2008, 19:13:17 UTC
Yeah, im very, very nervous about people reading this story who are affected by cancer. Keep in mind that this is fictional.

It is difficult to write.

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buffalorinkrat May 19 2008, 19:16:37 UTC
Yeah, I always keep reminding myself that it's ficitional, but it does make you realize that things like this are happening all the time to numerous individuals. I think so many people are effected by cancer in some way, shape or form that everyone can relate to it in a sense, especially the all to common fear that comes with cancer. It's such a scary thing, but I think it's also good to talk about it, or in your case write about it.

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fic_of_elise May 19 2008, 19:40:09 UTC
it is good to open up dialogue. I also want it to be realistic. Just, if you can, try not to make parallels between my story and cancer in your life. I don't want to cause harm, you know? But write a good story with a good journey.

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mistokath13 May 19 2008, 20:12:21 UTC
wow.

Poor Bear. Poor Ryan. Poor Brian. I feel sorry for them all, but most of all for Bear.

Make it better? Please?

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fic_of_elise May 19 2008, 20:23:08 UTC
define better?

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breezy48 May 20 2008, 00:36:11 UTC
Oh my gosh, I am trying so hard not to start crying. You're brilliance amazes me, really really amazes me. I love you.
Don't let Bear die, please.

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fic_of_elise May 20 2008, 05:30:23 UTC
*hugs*

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jadedragon_84 May 20 2008, 20:51:24 UTC
OMG! please don't kill bear! :(

bear needs a brian, please find bear his very own brian *begs*

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fic_of_elise May 21 2008, 01:12:12 UTC
I read that as "brain". So i sortof was scratching my head and wanting to reread my chapter to make sure I didn't make a mistake. lol.

Yeah, poor Bear. He's got some troubles on his plate.

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