Long comment! Onoez.xunfathomablexApril 10 2008, 19:17:47 UTC
I'm sad it is other, but this does feel like the ending: so yay! This means, dear, that you did an excellent job on closure and making me feel that yes, I want more, but that this is the end. I don't feel like any loose threads are dangling, so fantastic job on the ending.
“Top shelf... left...” Ryan hissed out, arching his back, pushing into Steve’s hands.
“Where mama keeps the cookies?” Steve said, chuckling, as he stretched over Ryan to the shelf. Something about this is so in character for both of them. They can't stop being goofballs, even on the verge of sex. ;P Sehr gut. Very in character
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Re: Long comment! Onoez.fic_of_eliseApril 10 2008, 22:21:56 UTC
the french spoken by Ryan is supposed to be awkward. He doesn't know french, and that phrase is pretty well understood/known by everyone. I threw it in there to make people smirk.
thank you for your comment! I love long rambly comments!!! they are my favorite!
I worked hard on this story as well, and I'm trying with the sex scenes. Each one is a challenge.
By the way, I'm making my trip up to Oswego tomorrow...I'm excited. I think I'll finally get some questions answered. I will definitely let you know where I choose to go next year. I probably won't have my mind made up until the deadline day (May 1st).
You should also consider revealing those Brian/Ryan stories you've got under wraps and/or in the works...I hope that's not just a juicy rumor, haha.
Go have some R & R...You deserve it, have a drink on me! :P
awww thank you! i do need R&R. I'm overwork, and getting sick, and not in the good flu kinda way, but the serious way. I'm seeing doctors and shit. It'll be ok, in the end, but im nervous and upset.
some bri/ry time might be exactly what I need.
and PLEASE tell me where you go next year! Maybe we should meet up for a sabres game? Have fun at Oswego - its in the middle of nowhere, but there's a LOT to do on campus. So it'll be good.
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I got kind of teary eyed at the end. This chapter had the cuteness and the hottness. Great writing, as usual.
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I like having scenes be both cute, and hot, or sad but hopeful. Switch up the dynamic.
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*dies*
More!!! That was seriously wonderful!!
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No more! It's over! thank you for wanting more though. It means i did a good job.
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I sooooo wish it wasn't over, but I'm definitely looking forward to whatever you write next!!
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I love Olie as well!
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“Top shelf... left...” Ryan hissed out, arching his back, pushing into Steve’s hands.
“Where mama keeps the cookies?” Steve said, chuckling, as he stretched over Ryan to the shelf. Something about this is so in character for both of them. They can't stop being goofballs, even on the verge of sex. ;P Sehr gut. Very in character ( ... )
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thank you for your comment! I love long rambly comments!!! they are my favorite!
I worked hard on this story as well, and I'm trying with the sex scenes. Each one is a challenge.
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:)
<3 always,
Becky
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By the way, I'm making my trip up to Oswego tomorrow...I'm excited. I think I'll finally get some questions answered. I will definitely let you know where I choose to go next year. I probably won't have my mind made up until the deadline day (May 1st).
You should also consider revealing those Brian/Ryan stories you've got under wraps and/or in the works...I hope that's not just a juicy rumor, haha.
Go have some R & R...You deserve it, have a drink on me! :P
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some bri/ry time might be exactly what I need.
and PLEASE tell me where you go next year! Maybe we should meet up for a sabres game? Have fun at Oswego - its in the middle of nowhere, but there's a LOT to do on campus. So it'll be good.
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that sadenss me.
greaaat story. its cutee!
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