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Mar 08, 2008 23:12

circle game
elise
ten of ten FINAL

pg 13
washington caps
Koz/ovie

( LAST PART )

viktor kozlov, alex ovechkin, washington capitals, circle game

Comments 15

breezy48 March 9 2008, 04:28:06 UTC

THE EVIL MAN IS GONEEE
*dances*
wooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo
Yayy! Finally ! togethernesss<333

fic_of_elise March 9 2008, 19:53:13 UTC

haha yeah, blockhead is gone.

quinnkeeper March 9 2008, 05:36:41 UTC

*dies*

....

*again*

Woah, just woah. I cant believe its over. Ohhh but its such a good over. It was wonderful. The little incounter with Dmitri, the protective Kozzy, the loving Alex. And the End! It was all just wonderful, and perfect and wonderful...opps, I think I said that already!

I love you and Alex/Kozzy...maybe when we're done with Greenie/Brooksie, we could take a little trip back down Alex/Kozzy lane...for me....

Love ya!!! xoxo

fic_of_elise March 9 2008, 13:00:54 UTC

Once I become alright with Ovechkin, i'll wrote mroe of him, but he's temporarily, and indefinitely, shelved as of now.

I'm working on sabres fic too, currently.

xunfathomablex March 9 2008, 15:29:18 UTC

IHU, KALININ.

But awwww, Kozlov saved Vechki from a horrible fate~ <3

I think that's it's a little too short, though. Although it's good, it could be a little bit longer, and it doesn't seem to have the sort of finality that an end to a story has. :/ It's not to say that I didn't like it, but the ending needs a little work. Other then that, it was an amazing story.

This isn't meant to be offensive, but just a little bit of concrit.

fic_of_elise March 9 2008, 19:52:36 UTC

no, no! you're not offensive. That's good. I love concrit. Yeah, it did end abruptly. I wasn't sure HOW to end it. I wanted to show closure... but, i also didn't want a huge dramatic scene. I wanted it to be left open... i don't know. I struggled with this piece.

abw92 March 9 2008, 16:23:55 UTC

I love how protective Kozzy got. Finally, they are back together. Sad that its over, but can't wait to read other stuff. Maybe a little Soupy/Miller. ;) lol.

fic_of_elise March 9 2008, 19:54:36 UTC

aww i dont know if i can do soupy miller right now and not have it be whiny and sad.

thank you for commenting, always.

dum_spiro19 March 9 2008, 19:32:36 UTC

That's a sweet ending for the two of them. I liked how at the end Alex emphasied that Viktor was "my Kozzy" since Dmitri had said Ovie was his.

fic_of_elise March 9 2008, 19:55:20 UTC

Yeah, koz and ovie are cute together. I'm glad you liked it. It's sweet to see them finally together.